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| April 03, 2015 | ||
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| furry weaboo garbage |
yeah, i get what you mean! best of luck to you on your art and
practice! ![]() |
| April 03, 2015 | ||
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Kirinoha- Oh, no! It's no bother, and thanks ^^ I don't have many
tools to work with without messing my work up, so I try to keep it
clean. And I am trying to thin out the muzzles on my canines, and I'll
be sure to study coyotes more (they're basically my neighbors where I
live) |
| April 03, 2015 | ||
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| furry weaboo garbage |
coyote's heads are much narrower than wolves or huskies, or any dog.
their ears are also enormous too lmao http://www.desertusa.com/animals/photos2/IMG_8066s.jpg http://naturemappingfoundation [...] otos/mammals/coyote_3261np.jpg and, i hate to repeat what everybody else here's said, but the muzzle is way too thick. it looks more like a wild feline's muzzle (say a tiger or a lion) if anything. no offense though, i like your coloring style. :0 |
| April 02, 2015 | ||
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Mighty- Right, sorry I didn't make it clear, but I do thank you for
providing links and advice, I'll be sure to do that when redrawing
her, or when I'm drawing an actual husky or wolf |
| April 02, 2015 | ||
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| The Mighty One |
Just as some word of advice, you should be more specific when you're
asking for constructive criticism (it's hard to help when you don't
know what you're working with). You only mentioned that you struggle
with "canines", which could be anything that falls into the canidae
category. And considering how popular Huskies and wolves are here, I
assumed this was a Husky. Since there is such a vast difference between dogs and coyotes, I would suggest looking up pictures of them and compare them to your drawing. |
| April 02, 2015 | ||
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Mighty- This isn't a husky, she's suppse to be a coyote, as for her
left shoulder, the pose I was trying to achieve was her arm being
raised upward (which is why the shoulder is placed for high up and why
the neck is short, I might lower it in a redrawn, however, I wasn't
happy with it at all in drafts I'll look into the links later when I have time RoCker- I do admit I should've added more fur to the chest, maybe once I've implemented the changes in a redrawn, I'll add it then, but for now I'm out of the house at school so I'll probably redraw it when I'm home TB- Yeah, I wasn't happy with how it turned out, I'll be sure to try and fix it later |
| April 02, 2015 | ||
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| The Mighty One |
Let's see here. The Head -The muzzle of this dog is a bit wide and tall, making it look more like a lion. Assuming, since you mentioned that this is a canine, that this is a Husky. Huskies have long and narrow muzzles. Samples: http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/isolated-husky-head-439937.jpg http://www.superbwallpapers.com/animals/husky-15072/ -It's more of a question of style, but I think adding too much shaggy fur on a non-shaggy breed can ruin a drawing. It isn't bad in this case, but I think the fur, if we're indeed dealing with a Husky, is a bit long. There also shouldn't long strands of fur coming off of the cheek area (the same can be said for the ears). *HINT* The tufts of fur on a Husky (even on other dogs and wolves) are usually even with the jaw line. http://www.pets4homes.co.uk/im [...] s/1431/large/531d8a8da8839.jpg http://images6.fanpop.com/imag [...] n-huskies-35540699-500-335.jpg https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/d2/Siberian_Husky_wit h_Blue_Eyes.jpg -The height of the head here seems a bit too short since the eyes are nearly sitting on top of the head (note the distance between the ears and the eyes). http://hdwbin.com/siberian-husky-photo.html http://stuffpoint.com/husky/image/358828-husky-husky.jpg The Body -The body, as a whole, seems scrunched, thin and curvy. http://previews.123rf.com/imag [...] ackground-Stock-Photo-wolf.jpg -The neck is too short and thin. Note, in the picture linked above, there's a good distance between the jaw and where the chest begins. -The shoulders should be down by the chest more, as these looks more like human shoulders position-wise. The left shoulder (in general) also shouldn't be that pronounced. http://www.bestfreejpg.com/wp- [...] /09/siberian_husky_in_snow.jpg -The back legs seem much too large, especially the far left one. And actually, you won't see the other leg (from this view) when they're sitting. http://www.sibernet.com/husky/adina_tus/img/sit.jpg |
| April 02, 2015 | ||
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| Big Bad Mod |
I think the muzzle should be thinnier and head looks a bit too large
(but maybe it's just because of the wide muzzle). |
| April 02, 2015 | ||
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I think the body's pretty good, maybe a little more fur on the chest.
The tail is pretty spot on. The only thing I would recommend would be
to work on muzzles/snouts. Maybe make them a little longer and
slimmer. Keep up the good work c: |