I was having trouble writing a fight scene for an upcoming chapter of White Legend Reborn, and reading this story helped me through - and then some. I couldn't stop once I started; I'd sort of forgotten just how GOOD this was.

So awesome going to die!!!

Someone should make some fanart of this story, seriously.

wow that was awesome!

Great story loved it!

In my opinion this was a lot better than kaila second chance because the story was more creative, but I thought balto was going to play a bigger role

That was an amazing story!!

I WILL PERSONALLY STRANGLE JOHNSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Otherwise, pretty good.

This was a very intersting story. It speaks a lot about heart and what you desire most in your heart than what others expect of you. You also mention family burden, and how important it is. It was very special of you to bring that in and it really improves the heart theme in the story and makes it even better. You are a very skilled writer and your grammar is near perfect. This was a really beautiful story and I really loved it.

I LOVED IT!!!