Secret of the Past

Author : redwolf03

Date sent : November 06, 2005

Rating : G (Everyone)

Description : This fanfic is nothing to do with the 'A Second Chance' series. Balto recounts the past to Jenna as he works to reveal a terrible secret...

Length : Long -

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Secret of the Past
By redwolf03

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April 14, 2016
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
:) Nice to see redwolf03'sstoriesa re still being read.

Since redwolf03's not here to comment, I'll take a stab at it. Unfortunately I think all of your points are pretty accurate (though this is the first I've heard of rabies being a potential STD). As a writer, all I can say is that sometimes being a writer means a certain degree of experimentation, and that means a certain degree of non-success. Even Edison had more than 1,000 failures before he got the light bulb to work.

April 13, 2016
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At first I was incredulous that Balto could have survived for six years with the Rabies virus but I was surprised to learn that the incubation period in humans could last this long. But, I don't understand how Jenna could forget her adventure with Balto. You would think almost dying several times would have stuck in her memory more than Balto's appearance and name. I guess she hit that tree hard enough to give her slight retrograde amnesia :icon300:. Also, did anyone think Balto's reasoning for keeping his secret was weak? He kept his secret because he wanted to see if Jenna would remember him? Are you serious? No wonder the town didn't trust him, Balto's a psycho. Also, what Balto did was downright criminal. The rabies virus can be spread through sexual contact and he knowingly agreed to have puppies with Jenna. If you tried that in real life, you would get locked up. Lastly, how is Jenna going to fulfill her promise to kill Balto if he shows symptoms? Wouldn't biting him, cause her to become infected? Just my thoughts, if you believe I'm thinking too deeply about this, you're probably right. It's fun to analyze these stories.

April 29, 2012
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At first I didn't like the story at all, but then after I mulled the concept over a while, I realized it isn't so bad. It's actually pretty cool for Balto to have a secret that dangerous!

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January 11, 2011
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:cryeyesout:
omg i almost cried! sooooooo goooooood!!!!!!

May 02, 2010
Usa Is not currently on the site
Wow, absolutely speechless.. Awsome work!! :)

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November 17, 2009
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I thought this was a pretty good story. Why are people so upset about Balto getting rabies for, anyway? It's a thing that happens in real life. Dogs get rabies all the time.

August 05, 2009
Usa Is not currently on the site
It was good but hard to belive

June 09, 2009
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
Hey, I don't want Balto to get rabies either! This was just to try something new! I solemnly swear I will not kill Balto with rabies. There. Now can you all relax? lol

May 05, 2009
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Off Topicers
if you make a follow-up please dont kill Balto:!

June 25, 2007
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Wolves of Mercy Falls
So are you saying Balto was a carrier (one who carries a disease and passes it to others but never gets sick
themselves) ?

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