The Thorns of the Rose Garden

Author : kema

Date sent : August 28, 2012

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Slightly Controversial

Description : Aylen, the lonely daughter of Balto, doesn't really have much company around town. With the exception of her uptight friend, Bea, she's a loner. But that all changes when she meets the swing dog that would change her life. Will the town accept them as a couple? Or will their love spiral downhill? ((WARNING: HOMOSEXUAL CHARACTERS. DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY HOMOSEXUAL FAN CHARACTERS OR CANON CHARACTERS.))

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The Thorns of the Rose Garden
By kema

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August 30, 2012
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Oh thank you so much Juuchan. That means a lot to me! :) Me and Makoza have been working on this little plot together for a little bit, so there's a lot more to come your way! She's actually going to be writing her own version of this fanfic from her character Hima's POV. :) And on the whole homosexuality stuff, I suppose so. XD Warning them is the best I could do. XD

August 29, 2012
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Kema: Oh, it's fine though. I like the fluff~! It's better than some other straight quick romance fics I've read on here. Please write some more - it's good to see different topics mentioned on here than just the typical "Balto character saves the day and gets a mate" story. This one is nice yet tragic once reality sets in. There's a hidden emotion in the ending, one that makes you feel sorry for what the lovers must do... I agree that I'd fave it if it were possible to!

And I know that there's a notable few that are against homo-characters altogether [canon or not], but I see it that if you warn them and someone offended by it still read/view things... and are offended, it's their own darn fault. Hopefully they don't get on you - just ignore them!

- Juuchan17

August 29, 2012
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Yeah, this was more of a set up for a different fic I plan on writing, but thanks so much! :) of course I was gonna go the fluffy route with this, but I made it pg-13 because I don't know how well homosexual relationships are going to be handled on here XD but yeah, thank you again! I'll try to make the next one more elaborate.

August 29, 2012
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Risky subject matter, but it's a good attempt that sorta works... in a cute, fluffy... and PG- rated sort of way. I wish that there was more build-up to the relationship, but the ending... wow, I did not see that coming. If you continue this, I've love to see how that changes things afterwards.

- Juuchan17

August 28, 2012
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This is really good, I honestly can wait to see more of it! If I could fave I would! I also really love how you made Hima's character, it is perfect!

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