Okay, balto saved Nome. Why would Jenna kill him? She is VERY out of character here. No offense, but I don't like this fic. I hate fics where Jenna utterly hates Balto for no reason, cause it's OUT OF CHARACTER.

i liked your effort on this fic but i just couldn't buy into the story. first off i know Jenna would never leave Balto for Steele no matter what anyone said or thought, she knew the negativity people and the other dogs had against Balto because he was half wolf, she looked deeper into Balto than just his looks, I'm just not convinced that she would leave or not to mention kill him just because of what rosies father said about only allowing to be allowing her to mate with pure breed dog. Second off Steele is a selfish dog who only cares about his glory and picking on others to gain power , he would need to go through revolutions of change for Jenna to even take a small glance at him but she has a great mate in Balto who loves her, it would be very foolish of her to leave him for Steele who would only take advantage of her and use her to his personal gain. third and last why did she leave and looked for a wolf pack to join? didn't she tell Balto she wanted to be with Steele's brother because she wanted to be a pure breed dog, doesn't make sense that she would turn around and join a wolf pack after saying she would rather live in town with her new boyfriend. I'm not criticizing you as an author in anyway i just wanted to give my insight on your story .