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Dragon Tamer	September 06, 2009

Just ->Thank you.


Just another user	September 05, 2009

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you have a very good point.


Dragon Tamer	September 05, 2009

Just --> Yeah, aside from the detail of why they are like that. Neither of them has the integrity or character for a real relationship. Violet, for example, thought absolutely nothing of enticing Toby to chase after her when he stated he was already taken. If that's not a lack of integrity, I don't know what is.


Just another user	September 05, 2009

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you know, now that I think about it, Pete and Violet might actually work out. look at them, she's been with almost every boy in town looking for a boyfriend, and he's been with almost every girl in town looking for a girlfriend, they're almost meant for eachother.


Dragon Tamer	September 01, 2009

St4rr --> Glad you liked it. And yeah, I designed the twists to be misleading. I wanted readers to feel the way Luna did.


St4rr	August 30, 2009

Great job with the fanfic and great plot twists. When violet kissed toby I thought this fanfic was going 2 turn out like the movie Obsessed


Dragon Tamer	August 23, 2009

Angel --> I promise I'll never put you through it.


Dragon's _Lady	August 22, 2009

*hugs* love the story ashke


Dragon Tamer	August 05, 2009

Just -->

Well, he did have it coming. What you sow, you shall reap.


Just another user	July 29, 2009

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I don't think anyone expected that!
I almost feel sorry for Pete, almost...

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