Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles

Author : Dragon Tamer

Date sent : June 05, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : Christmas time is coming around, and who knows what miracles may happen? But as Toby and Luna's past catches up with them heading for the future, it'll take more than one miracle to get them and Arrow through. And if something isn't done, this may be Luna's last Christmas, ever. (I wanted to post this last December, but I decided the series wasn't ready). Bonus: Contains never before revealed secrets for Pete fans! (Caution: some minor blood)

Length : Long -

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Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles
By Dragon Tamer

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Dragon Tamer
Dragon
Tamer
September 06, 2009
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St4rr --> Well, I thought Toby's fear of Luna's question was kind of funny. The Toby series does have humor, but of a different sort. The skit's brand worked very nicely for Charlie and Sasha, but I really wanted to let Toby and Luna do it their own way.
iluvsjoe --> Thank you.

Blitz(IluvsJoe)
Blitz(Il
uvsJoe)
September 05, 2009
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awesome.

St4rr
St4rr
September 05, 2009
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yea I saw the skit and I still think it would have worked nicely here too scince your fanfics don't have any really funny moments

Dragon Tamer
Dragon
Tamer
September 05, 2009
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St4rr --> Nice idea, but "What Are You Talking About?" was actually a re-interpretation of a skit on YouTube (see the link at the end), and was pretty much there to be funny. The scene in this story, while also intended to be funny, had to be true to the characters, and it needed to have a more personal, emotional aspect. So doing the same thing with them really wouldn't have worked.
Just --> You got it.

Just another user
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another
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September 03, 2009
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Member of the Shadow-Claw clan
I just figured out what you meant about the names, you named them after the three wise men.

St4rr
St4rr
September 03, 2009
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Great job with the fanfic. You should have made the part where Luna tells toby that she's pregnant more like your all dogs go 2 heaven fan fics

Dragon Tamer
Dragon
Tamer
August 23, 2009
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Angel --> Thank you.

Dragon's_Lady
Dragon's
_Lady
August 22, 2009
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Wonderful Job.

Dragon Tamer
Dragon
Tamer
August 18, 2009
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BlackJack --> Yeah, I think out of all the Toby stories, this was the one I enjoyed writing the most. You've gotten exactly what it ws meant to convey.

BlackJack16
BlackJac
k16
August 16, 2009
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This one is definately my favourite out of the Toby series. I love it because it is full of love, the joy of becoming a family, and the meaning of family. It also has it's intense and suspensful moments, and this makes it even more exciting to read. I love the themes that you include in your stories and how well you stick to the plot of the story throughout the series. Great job. :)
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