Thanks, Wolf_girl! I'll be sure to let you know when my next one comes up!

Once again, GREAT fanfic! I was so excited when I saw that Toby and Luna were back Keep up the good work!

Conay --> Thanks. Yeah, it was kind of a difficult plot to grab people into.

Well, this was interesting.

I thought the first three pages were rather... Flat, and I just couldn't get into it. But after that I started finding it interesting and mind-drawing, like all the previous Toby fanfics

9/10 in my opinion.

Blackjack --> Yes, I think a lot of the trouble between parents and children these days is that parents expect the wrong things of their children, and those who really do love their kids have a hard time showing it. With Toby being new at the whole fatherhood business, it seemed fitting to show that.
Rest assured, there will be plenty more to come.

I liked this story very much, a lot like most of your other Toby stories. It certainly explains a lot about what parents expect of their children, and what it means to take after your parents in certain ways. I loved the way you were able to let Caspar's true-self show through at the very end. You have showed us who he really is. I just love stories involving characters who are trying to find out who they are. It is a way of really getting inside the character of the individual and bringing it to life.

Great work again, mate. I just love your stories. Keep up the fantastic work.

I'm still ironing out the concept, but it should be underway soon.

That's the exact same thing I was wondering Ginga.

It took me two weeks, but I finished it! I luffs it. When's the next one? *impatient*

Knowing you DC, I'm sure it will :D