Toby Recharged: The Desire

Author : Dragon Tamer

Date sent : October 07, 2009

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : They're back, with reinforcements. Toby and Luna are enjoying raising their pups. But one pup takes after Toby in all the wrong ways.

Length : Long -

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Toby Recharged: The Desire
By Dragon Tamer

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December 06, 2009
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
Thanks, Wolf_girl! I'll be sure to let you know when my next one comes up!

December 03, 2009
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
Once again, GREAT fanfic! I was so excited when I saw that Toby and Luna were back ;) Keep up the good work!

November 02, 2009
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
Conay --> Thanks. Yeah, it was kind of a difficult plot to grab people into.

November 01, 2009
Uk Male Is not currently on the site
Exec. Producer + judge on ASA
Well, this was interesting.

I thought the first three pages were rather... Flat, and I just couldn't get into it. But after that I started finding it interesting and mind-drawing, like all the previous Toby fanfics

9/10 in my opinion.

October 28, 2009
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
Blackjack --> Yes, I think a lot of the trouble between parents and children these days is that parents expect the wrong things of their children, and those who really do love their kids have a hard time showing it. With Toby being new at the whole fatherhood business, it seemed fitting to show that.
Rest assured, there will be plenty more to come.

October 28, 2009
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I liked this story very much, a lot like most of your other Toby stories. It certainly explains a lot about what parents expect of their children, and what it means to take after your parents in certain ways. I loved the way you were able to let Caspar's true-self show through at the very end. You have showed us who he really is. I just love stories involving characters who are trying to find out who they are. It is a way of really getting inside the character of the individual and bringing it to life.

Great work again, mate. I just love your stories. Keep up the fantastic work. :)

October 21, 2009
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
I'm still ironing out the concept, but it should be underway soon.

October 20, 2009
Usa Is not currently on the site
That's the exact same thing I was wondering Ginga.

October 19, 2009
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Im the clown that nobody likes
It took me two weeks, but I finished it! I luffs it. When's the next one? *impatient*

October 19, 2009
Usa Is not currently on the site
Knowing you DC, I'm sure it will :D
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