Bambi's Summer, Chapter 1

Author : KittenLover 123

Date sent : July 28, 2013

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Other

Description : Bambi meets his friends, Cassie and Amber, and, after a confrontation with Faline, gets into BIG trouble at the meadow.

Length : Short -

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Bambi's Summer, Chapter 1
By KittenLover 123

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July 29, 2013
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Yeah Faline's too bubbly to really hurt anyone. lol

July 29, 2013
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Thanks, and thanks for the tip lol

July 29, 2013
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Now, it's good, but I do have a bit of criticism - mostly, Faline. I can understand that she wouldn't like Bambi's friends, and be cold to them, but physical violence seems like something her character is incapable of - this is a really common phenomenon, really, and actually a bit difficult to avoid, especially when writing a different character as Bambi's love interest - it's called "Character Derailment." Just a warning, but other than that, which is nitpicking, it's good. ;)


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