FINALLY! I got around to read the first of The Seven Kings saga, and this was an excellent opener.

Man, Adanna, I'd like to cuff the daylights out of her. In a way, I understand her point of view, but even with that she is just so selfish. Her father dies, yeah, okay, there is a mourning period, and in most cases, especially for her mother, it's hard to get over your first love, but when someone else comes along, makes the heart beat, hey, I don't blame Kiara for moving on with someone new, which if Adanna had a brain in that skull of hers, she would realize that's what Kovu would have wanted.
And Defir gave Kiara, and the Pridelands a male heir. Adanna has a brother, oh, excuse me, 'half' brother, but a brother nonetheless, and still she's ticked. Really pathetic.

I could have seen Abel becoming an amazing King, too bad the evil spirit of Zuri has now, less or more, possessed him with the possibility of becoming an even 'greater' King than his own father. Whether Abel is aware of it or not he's about to follow in the footprints of the late King Scar, but I think that when Abel succumbs to the evil temptations his reign is going to be far worse than that of Scar's.

Anyway, great start, Dakota, really great!

Haha, no, no it's alright Nama! I understand!

I know, Adanna is very bad at understanding that she's still loved, even though things have changed. She'll come to realize that soon enough, but until then, she's going to continue being a jerk >XP

And nooooow this is when things get worse xD

I'm so sorry I forgot to comment on this earlier...all I could do was fangirl and squee.

I agree with Claire, Adanna is acting like a major jerkass in this. I kinda understand where she's coming from but at the same time I just want to smack her and yell 'YOUR MOM STILL LOVES YOU, YOU IDIOT!'

And then Zuri showed up...CRAP! WE'RE ALL IN TROUBLE NOW! And thus Abel fell to the Dark Side.

Yeah, Adanna's a complete jerk in this :V But she gets better, don't worry! She'll hopefully redeem herself in the end. And yeah, things are only going to get worse from here on out :B But thank you for the comment! ^^ Hopefully the following books will be even better than this!

Oh dear this isn't going to turn out good at all is it. I kinda felt a little annoyed with Adanna I mean yes she doesn't have to like Defir but she didn't have to completely hate on her mother either. Abel is changing and not for the better I'm starting to worry that things will only get worse 3:

Great start though on the fic this fic I mean xD Keep up the good work.