The Strange Visitor Part 1

Author : MW Roach

Date sent : October 05, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Comedy

Description : When a new stallion with strange markings requests permission to join Spirit's herd, the buckskin is faced with a difficult decision; to accept the unnatural request or to fight off the intruder. Of course, there's nothing at all natural about the weird stranger. He's almost...alien...

Length : Short -

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Spirit
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Rain
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The Strange Visitor Part 1
By MW Roach

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June 11, 2013
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HA ha ha this is hilarious, well done ^^

December 28, 2012
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"Hey! You guys have long, bushy things coming out of your butts, too! OUTSTANDING!" :mdr:

This is absolutely amazing! You had me hooked and laughing my pants off the entire story! Please keep writing!

December 16, 2012
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OH MY GOD, this is awesome! I laughed so hard I was probably shaking! :39: It kinda reminded me of the video game pikmin. A gob well done I must say! :icon108:

October 07, 2012
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Like it? I adore it!

October 07, 2012
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
Updated with a cover!

Thanks so much everyone! I really didn't think you guys would like it all that much ^^

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October 07, 2012
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This is hilarious!!! I really like this!

October 06, 2012
Canada Is not currently on the site
Wow this is amazing Roach! I laughed so hard! xD Please please please please write more! ;D

October 06, 2012
Australia Is not currently on the site
i loved reading this so much i nearly wet myself when i neared the end of readin this. I love how he screamed out "Hey! You guys have long, bushy things coming out of your butts, too! OUTSTANDING!" oh you are so talented Roach i never new you were a writer but now i do and im imoressed. of i could go on forever but to cut things of this was hilarious, amazing, outstanding and full of long bushy things hehe lol

October 06, 2012
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Mystic: Thank you very much! I've been a writer way longer then I've been an artist, so I have a lot more experience with that! I'm glad you found it amusing!

Amare: I'm glad you liked it too! I plan on adding Indus in the next chapter or so ;)

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October 05, 2012
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xD I choked on my apple lol I cant wait to see if Indus steps in xD

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