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I've just finished the first part of my new FanFic, Ice Heart, and I am working on part 2. It's pretty good so far, so please read it! I think I'm going to make a sequel to it if people like it. And thanx for the comments!
Here's a discription of the wolves from Ice Heart:
Gaia: 1 year old wolfess- Blue-gray, and unusually fluffy fur with amber eyes. Kind and Brave, keen hunter and fighter
Kragnar(Krag): Dark, smooth chocolate brown fur, sapphire blue eyes, long tail. Wise, Strong, and loving
Ice Heart(Kuron): Pure, thin white coat, icy blue eyes, sharp claws and evil grin. Sly, evil, a blood-thirsty cold-hearted rat head.
Roxaz: Original Alpha, Krag's older brother. Dull brown fur, brown eyes. Bossy, secretly cowardly, can be nice to talented wolves.
Xiar and Capri: Bro and Sis- Identicle white with black back stripe and stockings and muzzle. Nice, caring, fast
Tusu and Tisa: Tusu, gary wolf with red tail and green/gold eyes, cruel cooward. Tisa, sly timber wolfess.
Mukki: elder black wolf with damaged eyes. Kind, caring, slow, poor huntress.
That's all for now!
= 4 | June 05, 2008 | ||
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Good sotory, both of them, actually. :D Greywolf--I wrote a story about Steele too. He changed a lot! :D |
| October 08, 2007 | ||
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| Wind Swift Pack |
Wow. I thought I was the only person that shows a vilan changing. Accept in my case in the stories that I write, Niju changes. In my stories, Steele stays bad, but there's a first time for everything, if I'm saying this right. I'll take a look at it. |
| October 07, 2007 | ||
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Nice story, but you should try expanding it a little more. Try reading some of Rotramel's writing tutorials if you want some ideas. |
| September 15, 2007 | ||
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hum... I did not understand everything (beceause my english is limited
!) but, it's good ! ![]() |
| September 15, 2007 | ||
Fan chars mod | ||
| Grande M�chante Admin ~ |
Why you spend this in english if it's in Balto Source french ? I don't inderstand |
worked really hard on it!