I finished reading it. As before, excellent work. I would
very much like to see a sequel. Perhaps it would be a good
idea to expand on what's going on inside the characters'
thoughts and emotions. It might add an extra depth to the
story, but on the other hand it might dilute the action. You
decide. Either way, I'm eager to see what you come out with
next.

Very good word choice!

I've only read about halfway through, but I fully intend to
read the rest. I've never been a fan of Star Wars, but this
is GOOD! Even though I barely have a clue what any of the
ships are, the story is quite entrancing. You have done a
wonderful job of merging the Balto story into a whole new
universe. EXCELLENT JOB!

yay star wars

Hey Star,
It's Starwarsisme. Love your crossover, I also started one about a month ago. Mine fanfic about Star Wars is about that Balto is trapped on Darth Vader's flagship the Executor and gets rescued by the ghost of Anikan Skywalker. It's called Wreckage and Rescue. I hope you read it and enjoy it as much as I did yours!

Good Job! i hope you get to writing a Balto Wars 2!