The Brown Hill Spirits (part 10)

Author : dragonkitty411

Date sent : January 26, 2009

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : Life has moved on, and new connections are beginning to form within the pack, and not just between Achak and Hokee. But then things start to go downhill for poor Hokee when he gets sick and his wolf-side is put to the test. Also when Achak decides that he should pay his respect's to his mate's father, he makes an interesting discovery about the pup's past.

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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 10)
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October 14, 2009
Usa Is not currently on the site
it brought tears to my eyes when nayeli said "hi again mommy" to the grave

February 16, 2009
Uk Female Is not currently on the site
UltimateAnswer-42(saves lives)
I loved this series! :cool:

February 08, 2009
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Smiley Sam --> Thank you! 8D I'm glad you thought it was unexpected.

Joker --> Haha me too. It was sad when he didn't D8

February 04, 2009
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
wind swift pack.nothing else
This is an outstanding new chapter.Really glad achak is starting to accept Hokee.Hope the new comes out soon.

February 01, 2009
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
wow!!! that was so... unexpected! Kayiya as Hokees mother and Kaltag as his father was brilliant!! fabulous writing as always. cant wait for the next part :P

January 31, 2009
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XCelestial.Beex --> lol Thanks. I figured it was a pretty logical question to be asking some wolf he didn't know.

Iditarod --> lol Yeah. But it shall take an interesting turn ;)

VividLegacy --> If you look at Kayiya's latest image, you see how alike she and her son look. ;) Achak doesn't know Kayiya personally. He knows her name, and might know she's Kita's sister, but he's never met her. And Achak's pups are a little over 50% wolf, but you're right about Achak not seeing them as such.

January 31, 2009
Australia Female Is not currently on the site
I knew it, lol. Hokee looks way too much like Kaltag not to be, lol. But I never expected Kayiya, of all wolves. Whoa.Does Achak know Kayiya, or just Kita. And Nayeli. I love Nayeli. Her and Hokee would be so sweet together. And does Achak realise that his pups are 50% wolf? He probably does, but he just doesn't see them that way. Anyway, great work on this!

January 30, 2009
Usa Is not currently on the site
Say wut?
Haha! Now Achak can say to Hokee, "Your mother's sister was my mate's worst enemy." (Don't ask me why he'd want to say that, though. lol)


Anywho, great job once again, you two! I can't wait 'till the whole Nayeli/Hokee/Zepher thing comes to its climax!

January 30, 2009
Uk Female Is not currently on the site
Wow, finally. Even though I'm late at reading it xD
For some reason, I just love the part where Achak says 'I knew your daughter' and Balto just says 'Which one?'
No idea why, but those two lines were so cute.

January 28, 2009
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
I am a lone wolf,with friends
Kaltag and...Kayiya? Haha, didn't think they'd be Hokee's mom and dad XD, also I thought is realy cute when little Nayile thought Hokee was going to die.
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