The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9)

Author : dragonkitty411

Date sent : June 26, 2008

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Other

Description : Tragedy strikes, changing everything that everyone in the pack had known. What will happen now that one of them has been taken away? Will things ever be the same again? Characters are copyrighted by their respectful owners. Fic written by Draco and CatWhoHas14Tails

Length : Average -

Characters :
Hokee
Hokee
Nayeli
Nayeli
Achak
Achak
Ayashi
Ayashi
Dartanion
Dartanion
Kanook
Kanook
Olathe
Olathe
Takoda
Takoda
Zepher
Zepher
Zephyr(SC)
Zephyr(SC)
Kiona
Kiona
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 9)
By dragonkitty411

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Deleted member 16722
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July 21, 2009
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That is the saddest story I have ever read. I almost shorted out my keyboard after reading this... POOR KIONA!! :cry:

Hype
Hype
April 19, 2009
Usa Is not currently on the site
Omg that is so sad! that was the most unexpecting twist ever! I never thought that that could happen to Kiona! Awesome writing Cat and Draco! It's amazing!

sakura_XL
Sakura_X
L
March 31, 2009
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that was an extremely moving piece of work, I will be shore to read it again.

stormer23
Stormer2
3
March 08, 2009
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I'm my own pack
Oh.... my god. Kiona died. I almost cried! :whimper:

catwhohas14tails
Catwhoha
s14tails
December 15, 2008
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Wolf Paws --> Thanks. And you'll see.
The Drifter --> We
have about a third of the next chapter done and its moving quickly.
Don't worry
dramah8r10 --> We will
Tovah_XoXo -->
You'll see 83
kittylover --> Stay tuned for the text chapter 83

Kittylover
Kittylov
er
December 13, 2008
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
none
That was sad when I read the line that said Achak heard a noise
I was hoping so badly that it was Kiona waking up or something along
those lines. Why did she have to die!?

dramah8r10
Dramah8r
10
November 04, 2008
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
OMG!! kiona waz my fav character! it breaks my heart
to read those last lines! plz plz PLZ! make a better ending!

The Replicator
The
Replicat
or
November 03, 2008
Usa Male Is not currently on the site
I'm shocked. I can't say anything else but... I'm shocked. I'm
sure you have a very good reason for doing this, so I won't bend your
ear raving about it, but that was as if a cold arctic blast had shook
me to my very core. Please continue with your story soon so that we
can see what happens in the end. Thank you.

Wolf Paws
Wolf
Paws
October 23, 2008
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
The Jesus Freaks!
Kiona! NOOOO!!! When I read the last few lines, I literally
started to cry! Catwhohas14tails and Draco, there had better be an
awesome ending to this! Still, it's an unexpected twist, which I must
admit is rather a jaw-dropper.

Draco
Draco
September 28, 2008
Fanart mod, Questions mod, Fan chars mod... Usa Female Is not currently on the site
The Mod Squad
WP--> The story's not over yet ;D
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