Can i Join with my oc,Flare

May I enter Talon? I had made him already. He has no mate, never did; he is, however, very polite, laid-back, and respectful. Could you check him out? (I might end up tweaking his design)

yes, I do.

but ive already posted the ext bit of history do you thing its good........

ive got more history just too lazy to do it ere is

well a few months passed and samul was went bonkers about may before he knew her it as like evreyday he thouht about her he couldnt give up hope for her he asked his reind faline who tol him evrething she liked and disliked he treid to make her fell better about the huge break up he brung her flowers even doing the most heroic thing wich was whe man had came to the forest all the dogs ran ater may he ran behind them killling them all then killed more at the medowthen just as man nearlly shot him he ran fast as lihtnig and also killed man!!!!! the crowd cheered assamul saved may from a thorn bush she as trapped in even anthony and jackie were inpressed unforttlly he felt quit dizzy may thought he had died but really he jad passed out because he as awful tierd the next morniing they got married and even now some deer mothers tell this story to there fawns about this heroic deed the end

i known um ill say his parents are dead is that ok

Just as Auliken found her, crows began to fly overhead and the new Prince of the Forest, Bambi, ran to them to warn them. The next think Auliken knew deer from all around were fleeing from Man. Auliken began to flee, too, even more terrified than when a lion attacked him. Then he remembered something. May! Auliken ran back in the direction that he came from. May was there without Antony and Jackie, unable to find her way to them from all the fleeing deer. No matter how many times they were called they did not show themselves. Auliken rushed to find the lost fawn. He found Jackie soon enough, and told her to follow him. Then Auliken found Antony and told him the same thing. They all rushed back to May, who followed Auliken out of the meadow and back to a den. Auliken didn't exactly know where she lived, but pushed her into a random empty den. When it was safe, May thanked him for saving her's and her children's lives. Auliken blushed and told her it was no problem. After that the two met up every day, and soon became close friends. Auliken thought Ronno was mad to get divorced from such a sweet doe. He soon developed a crush on her. One day, when he met May, something urged him to confess his feelings. So he did, feeling certain that she did not feel the same way. But May said she loved him too and nuzzled him. They later became mates, and Auliken became very close to his adoptive fawns. He couldn't have been happier without May...

Name: Auliken
Age: Same as May
Gender: Male
Parents: Deceaced, Mina is his adoptive mother
Siblings: None
Crush/mate: May
Fawns: Unlikely, Antony and Jackie are his adoptive fawns
Personality: Friendly
Likes: May, making friends, the sun
Dislikes: Man, fire, lions
History: Auliken was born alone and near a lion's pride. He soon learnt to walk but his parents were attacked by some lions. Auliken managed to escape alive but his parents were not quite so lucky. They were killed. Over the years Auliken learnt how to survive on his own. Mina found him one day and adopted him. Auliken grew stronger and became friends with Bambi and Faline. He had a crush on Faline at first, then Auliken realised that she was in love with Bambi. Auliken decided to leave everything the way it was and not got involved too much. He wanted Faline to be happy. Auliken never knew that Faline had a sister. One day Auliken heard that Bambi was coming to live with him and became excited. He would finally have a brother. But it turned out that he never did. Mina returned in the middle of the night where Auliken was still awake, waiting. He soon heard the whole story and understood. As an adult, he heard that a beautiful doe had divorced her mate, Ronno. Wondering who had partnered with Ronno, he went out to search for her. All he knew was she had two fawns, Antony and Jackie. One day, he saw Faline and decided to ask her. Faline looked surprised and told him that May, her sister, had gone to the meadow. Auliken rushed to see her and asked does all around where she was.

Hm, I might join this, it sounds interesting!

Um... your entry, Samul is Bambi and Falines fawn... May is Falines sister... gross, no offence