Thanks that'll prove to be useful

Unfortunately I don't get the joke. D: However, if you need anything on deer behavior at all, I'm doing a biology project in which I will be observing them as closely as I possibly can. So if you ever need a description for a place of common bedding sites, or what they like to eat(White-tails have problems digesting grass, actually), or anything, I can help.

Yes I've just done some Kung fu Punctuation as a joke

Alright; but knowing me, I might naturally add facets to his personality, building on what you've given me.

Chapter 4 whatever, I need chapter three to explain Vertrou and Lojalis's personality.

Fawns, They will become adults in chapter 3. I would love you to make some characters, Falinelover has adopted Nocere and Lojalis, and I want some one to adopt Vertrou ( These two characters appear in chapter 2 , which I've started ) Thanks for the tips by the way.

I really do enjoy it though I was confused on whether they are fawns or adults here: if Ronno's a fawn, his antlers are in velvet, thus they should be a bit too soft to cut Nocere like that if you need a character for a certain role and don't wanna bother to make them yourself, I would love to.

Feathervenom what do you think, since I like your fan fic of an alternate universe, what do you think of chapter 1?

Yes wait until tommorow and I'll put up the finished render I trust you'll do an interesting history

can I have nocere.