Descendant of the stars chapter 1: Ancient poem

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : September 13, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Chapter one. Ronno starts to become a bully as his antlers come in. Faline and Bambi meet two bucks, Kral and an injured buck ... and Ronno decided to eliminate Bambi. With the help of an ancient poem, can Bambi tackle Ronno?

Length : Very short -

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Descendant of the stars chapter 1: Ancient poem
By JetxLucy

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September 16, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Thanks that'll prove to be useful :p

September 16, 2012
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Unfortunately I don't get the joke. D: However, if you need anything on deer behavior at all, I'm doing a biology project in which I will be observing them as closely as I possibly can. So if you ever need a description for a place of common bedding sites, or what they like to eat(White-tails have problems digesting grass, actually), or anything, I can help. ;)

September 16, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Yes I've just done some Kung fu Punctuation as a joke

September 16, 2012
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Alright; but knowing me, I might naturally add facets to his personality, building on what you've given me.

September 16, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Chapter 4 whatever, I need chapter three to explain Vertrou and Lojalis's personality.

September 15, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Fawns, They will become adults in chapter 3. I would love you to make some characters, Falinelover has adopted Nocere and Lojalis, and I want some one to adopt Vertrou ( These two characters appear in chapter 2 , which I've started ) Thanks for the tips by the way.

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September 15, 2012
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September 15, 2012
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I really do enjoy it though I was confused on whether they are fawns or adults here: if Ronno's a fawn, his antlers are in velvet, thus they should be a bit too soft to cut Nocere like that ;) if you need a character for a certain role and don't wanna bother to make them yourself, I would love to.

September 15, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Feathervenom what do you think, since I like your fan fic of an alternate universe, what do you think of chapter 1?

September 14, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Yes wait until tommorow and I'll put up the finished render I trust you'll do an interesting history lol

September 14, 2012
Usa Female Is not currently on the site
can I have nocere.

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