Descendant of the stars chapter 2: Past hints

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : September 15, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Whilst batteling Ronno , Bambi finds he is a formidable foe. Also two new strange deer enter the forest not like any other deer... one battles Ronno in a vicious fight. Nocere finds them strange but he does not find Lojalis a threat. But Vertrou, he is wary of.

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Descendant of the stars chapter 2: Past hints
By JetxLucy

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September 16, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
Hmm that's not what mena thinks ...

September 16, 2012
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I think I'm starting to understand Vertrous's personality, and I feel so sorry for Hasslich! He can't be that bad!

September 16, 2012
Uk Is not currently on the site
I know, its's spelt like that, But google translate wouldn't let me copy it, so I had to write it and I dont have the points on the a type. The reason he fought is just to show what kind of personality he has, I do realize other wise, thanks for the nice comment.

September 16, 2012
Female Is not currently on the site
Just a tip, it's not written hasslich. It's writtren h�sslich with little points on the a.
Aside that, the chapter was very well written and interesting. But normaly, bucks only fight for a doe when another buck threathens to take her. They don't just charge at any buck they see.
But I liked this chapter, though. Great work!


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