You NAILED Tobi in this. xD I imagine she'd get along very well with Wylee, even I'd she isn't interested in him. You brought her to life perfectly... LOVED this chapter! I rather like Rambo, now that I got to see more of his personality. I disn't like him much at first and now feel bad for Gurri xD he would have been a good mate for Gurri.

A bird. It was... On fire.

Just the bird is more important than triangles, man. Just. The bird.

MW, I DO have a suggestion about your renders... I just now looked this back over on my desktop rather than my tiny laptop, and in the last shot of Geno and Gurri, the blood on Geno looks VERY pixelly and out of place compared to the rest of the image. xD Just something that I saw - maybe you could use a blur or smudge tool in the future, but honestly, I've never done it, so I'm guessing. It's still excellent!

OhmygoshIdidn'tcatchthat xD

I saw the comic, by the way. I love it~ HURRY UP ON THE NEXT cHAPTER D:<
No, not really, don't rush. xD I just happen to be impatient. :b

, nah; Gangsta, playa...but not hippy XD Glad you like my writing! Working on an "Avengers" comic-type thing on DeviantArt, too.


The irony of it all is, while Geno is fighting to protect his older sister, his YOUNGER sister sneaks off with his BEST FRIEND

And thanks to everyone for all the wonderful comments! I appreciate them all!

Yeah, but I was thinking hippy xD I love him though. I can't wait for the next chapter!! I love your writing, MW, I swear, you have got to write a book sometime. I'd buy it in a heartbeat.

Also, I love that Rambo made note of the fact that Geno was kinda-sorta fighting for Gurri's breeding rights... xD

Feather: She's making her intro in the next chapter "The Outcasts" Also, Wylee sort of *is* supposed to be like a 'gangsta' deer. Just read his profile; he grew up in a herd of deer in the city. I also like my characters to deliver their dialogue in much the same manner as the actors whom I chose to portray them. If you've ever seen the movie "Open Season", Martin Lawrence does the voice of Boog the bear, so I have him talking in the same way he does in all of his movies.

Come on, now, Gurri... That guy tried to kill your brother. ...Danget.

And YOU thought LOKI was ballsy... xD Geno's fifty times more so if you ask me!

And what, is Wylee trying to be a gangster or something? xD I didn't expect him to be paired off with River, that's for sure...
I do wonder where Raven is. D: C'mon, buddy, I need you to stay put! Stop running off!
I admit, though, that I was hoping to see Tobi. I do get it, though, since unless she came up in the end, it wouldn't have worked, and I doubt she came across Geno in this state... She wouldn't have cared, though, poor thing was scared out of her mind D: Anyway, I'm sure she'll come in when it's fitting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

One thing I noticed, though...when the battle starts, Flower says that Blossom bet against Geno, and after Geno's victory, Stinkweed says his mother won a bet. A logical mistake, I assume?

Nice! Grabs popcorn while reading*. : Lumi made an appearence! I am pretty sure I thought Geno was going to win that spar match but I was wrong!

Poor Geno...No one cares.. Epic chapter, had me on the edge of my seat B3