I'd like to point some things out since you are a new member.
1. Every roleplay needs a plot. Roleplays on AS aren't just creating herds/packs/prides/ect... There has to be some sort of story line.
2. You should have a separate bio form for other people to fill out for their own characters. Make it blank so it is easier for them to use.
3. Always wait for at least two or three people to join before starting your roleplay. It's just considerate.
4. Characters really should have a history section as well and a personality section that is at least two lines long. (I know that's getting a little nit-picky, but it's still true.)
These are just the basics and while doing these things are helpful, they aren't much help alone. I would also suggested:
- (re)Reading the
RP Rules by steet- Reading over the
Official Roleplay Guides of AS- Reading through the more recent
Roleplaying Guide by myself- Skimming over some of the other roleplays in the open and private general roleplay forums by older members including: Moki Hunter, Windancer, Wolfcall, Hype, Solo Hero, and myself.
I hope this advice helps!
~ Black Rose