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This isn't a matter of the character's colors need to be darkened, it's a matter of the colors don't go together. I realize this is something you want to gear towards children, and there are shows out there with unnatural colors, like Blue's Clues and My Little Pony for example. But when it comes to story books, I'm not sure I've seen sparkle animals. And considering, from what I'm seeing here, your other characters are not sparkle animals (the cat is kinda sparklish, but I think that's not as bad as the dog character). It just seems random to have natural colored animals and then one that is toothpaste mint green, yellow, blue and pink.

And How Does It Make it Bad ? Yes. The Main point Was too Gear it Towards Children , Because Kids Love Things That are Funny And Unrealistic at times. However , I'm trying to mix The Story Up A bit , and The charecters too , So I don't Have Mary - Sues , Gary - Stus , and Have Some Realism to it.

Anyways , I Reamped some of the Charecters and are posting their Bios Here , since this is an explaination topic.

Name : Mac
Name meaning: Son of ; Greatest
Gender : Male
( Breed ) Species : White Bengal Tiger
Age : Teen to Young Adult
Fur Color(s) : Snow White with Jet Black stripes
Eye Color : Icey Blue
Mate : Trixie
Crush : Trixie
Crusher : Trixie , Lola , and Chloe
Friends : Diego and Alex
Enemies: Wolfine , Sarafina , The Saver ( Also known as sheldon )
Story Statu: antagonist ( Villain )
Minions: The Evil Kimberly , Ruthy , And Samantha
Parents : Leo X Hannah
Sibling (s) : Chance ( Brother )
Body : Very Tall , Buff , But is Of an Average weight.
Likes : Being Bossy , Teasing Wolfine , Being Filthy Rich , and Hanging Out with the cool kids
Dislikes : Losing , Wolfine , And Lame People. Hates it When People Mess up His Plans.
Personailty: Bossy , Arrogant , Brave , but at times can be a coward. He Is only Nice to Animals of His Type. Mac Is Bossy by Nature , and loves to boss his friends around. He Acts like he is a stuck up Rich Tiger Who Thinks He is Better then Everyone else. He Also can be very Greedy at times. He Also Can be Selfish as well , and does not have a Nice bone in his body.

Bio : Mac was Born in a line of Rich Tigers. His Mother and Father Loved him And His Brother , Chance very Dearly. However , As Mac And Chance Got Older , Their Parents Spoiled them a little too much. As A result , both Brothers became Really Bratty towards their Parents so they Could get anything They wanted. Both Parents were foolish , and Did'nt want their babies to be Unhappy. Therefore , it Led Mac and Chance down a very Greedy road. As A Teen , Mac Had The Same Spoiled life he had as A kid , And got very furious at his Brother for even bothering to change his ways. Ever since then he had a Grudge against His Brother. He first Met Wolfine in high school , And The first time He saw Him , He decided to Act Better then him , and Pick on wolfine for Not Being The Upclass rich type. Wolfine Tried To fend Him off once , but even though He was A prince , He was a little bit Weaker then Mac. Once Mac found out that Wolfine was a prince , he Got Jealous. Mac also was Very attractive as a teen. When he was young , He was not very attractive / Upclass. Sadly , he only Had 3 Girls Who liked him , not that he was bothered because Honestly , He was not that into Girls at that age. When Sarafina Moved to the School , He kinda Had A Small Crush on her , but Only That. Months Later , He started to see Wolfine and Sarafina Like each other. He found out that she was a Princess , And That if he married her , He could Take all of her money , and Divorce her , It was easy as that. Mac Suceeded At getting Sarafina , but Did'nt Know the correct way to fall in love with a Girl , He acted Like his normal Selfish self. Soon Wolfine Caught onto it , And He warned Sarafina , But Sarafina Already Had suspected of him not Being True ,.And She Broke Up with Him. Mac was Outraged and was determined to get Sarafina Back if That was the last thing He would do. Mac Hanged out With his friends , Diego and Alex , Also tough Guys like him. He Ordered Them to Kill Wolfine , but there plan Backfired. Wolfine Was not Killed. Later on , He Hires The Evil Kimberly to Kill Wolfine And Even Sarafina ! He only wanted the money Anyway , and If They had a Family together , to kill the little ones too. The Evil Kimberly Thought It was Kinda Harsh at First , but then He was forced By Mac , to Try to get the Job done. When Wolfine and Sarafina Fly on the Airplane To Hawii to get Married , Ruthy , Samantha , And Evil Kimberly Tag along. With the Evil Kimberly as the Pilot. Mac does not Have much more as a Roll in the movie. Main Villan is the Minons Themselves ,As Mac Is Kinda A Cowardly , Thinks he's Brave wimp.
Voice Actor : Jim Cummings

Note : I know the Bio is Kinda Harsh and you wonder how can this Possibly Be a kids Movie ? First off... The Villans are Fails , and it Just Does happen they never Fataly harm any other Charecters. Far as the Voice actor , I've seen other people do it , so I thought I'd Give it a try. It's who I would love to voice him , And Artwork will be Submitted for him in a minute. And Also , A little stamp that Should be
here :

EDIT : If anyone says Mac is a Gary Stu think again... I took a couple of Is you charecter a Gary Stu tests and almost all of times that I took them , It said he was well balanced.

Sorry. My phone Does that for some reason sometimes.

Sorry about the double post. Will make sure my.phone does not Do that Again.

This belongs more to the General Fan Arts section.
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***** I like you

If you would like some help with color pallets I may not be an expert but I can help you compromise.

That would be nice. Thank you.

Yeah if you give me a picture of each character and a little personality description of each I will show you what I think

Ok. Mac Is the one a Couple of posts above you. I'm Writting another Charecters Bio here soon as well , so Stay tuned.

Mac is a really solid character. His colors are believable and it's good that he has flaws. All characters have flaws, and for him to have flaws that people can relate to is even better. A perfect character is no fun!

Thank you. That means so much to me. I'm Working on Anothers Bio.

Perfect! Can't wait!

Time for another Bio.

Name : Cheetah
Name Meaning : Variegated
Gender : Female
Species : Cheetah
Eye color : Brown
Fur Color : White with Red Spots
Nose color : Pink
Mother : Sarafina
Father : Wolfine
Siblings : Bouncey , Wolfineson , Jessica , Runnybouncey , Runny , Baby Cheetah , Spotty ( Twin Brother ) Pink Bouncey , ( But she Died ) As well as The Striped Runny .
Enemies : The Evil Kimberly , Ruthy , Mac , and Samantha.
Friends : Dingo , Spotty , And The Saver ( Sheldon )
likes : Fish , Playing With Spotty , And Messing Around with Bouncey and her Siblings , And Dingo.
Dislikes : Bouncey ( Sometimes ) , The Evil Kimberly , Ruthy , Samantha , and Mac.
Crush : Dingo
Crusher(s) : Dingo
Mate : Dingo ( Later in life )
Personality : Sweet , Caring , Can Be Mean at times , as well As Ignore Spotty at times Because he Thinks He's a Know it all. She can Be Mischievous as well.
Story Status : Protagonist

Bio :
Cheetah is one of the Chlidren of Sarafina and Wolfine. She Was Abandoned along with her twin Brother , Spotty. One Day , Wolfine and Sarafina Found her and Spotty. They knew that they could not leave them behind , so They Adopted them along With the other Children that they adopted. Cheetah Grew fond of The love Her new Family has Given her. She Loved Eating Fish along with her brother Spotty. She Loved When her Father told her stories of the past , and she loved Messing with her brother and Bouncey as well. She Has some Flaws Though. She Does not get good Grades in School , And No guy Really has Interest in her. She is Also known of Not getting away with Crimes. In the Catfamily , her Role Was An Adopted Cheetah and Was trapped in A Cage along with the Sibilings ( Except Bouncey ) , And her mom and dad. She and Spotty get their own Movie Which They Gave Everyone in the Family Old Sardines for dinner.The Family Got very Sick , And Spotty and Cheetah Ran away. Spotty Thought that they Had killed the Family , Cheetah Knew that her Brother was Wrong , even though Spotty acted like A Know it all. She And Spotty get help From Dingo , a Sabortooth. They had to Find 3 Ingredients to Make the Healing antidote. Dingo Developed a Crush on Cheetah , And They had a little Romance in the movie. The evil Kimberly Had A Plan to kill Spotty and Cheetah Because he thought that The others Were dead.

I'll Submit A Drawing of what she looks like soon.

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