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 Post subject: Incredible Shrinking Rebecca (pitch)
PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2012 8:00 pm 
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For those whom are gonna ask, This is not gonna be a repeat of the Incredible Shrinking Molly
This is mostly inspired by the 1981 cult film "The Incredible Shrinking Woman"

The story goes something like this
Rebecca is invited to a dance ball that's a month away and finds out that she gained 30 pounds and must lose weight and fast
The next day, The fox scientist (from "Incredible Shrinking Molly" episode) invented what suppose to be a supplement so good that it will make diets obsolete
She ignored his recommended dosage of it because she was desperate to lose weight in time for the ball
after she had her coffee with the supplement (via a dosage beyond recommendation) and she starts to gradually shrink
a week later, She's now shrunk to that of Kit's height to the point that her clothes are becoming too big for her ans asks Wildkat to make clothes for her
a few days past and she's now no bigger than her daughter (Molly) forcing her to sleep with her like a plush toy
When the ball came she's now no bigger than a Barbie doll making her time time there much more challenging and unpleasant than enjoyable due to her new size
after 2 days, her shrinking finally stopped and she's now no bigger than a marble making her job and raising Molly virtually impossible

The ending is the fox scientist presents her with an antidote but it only reverts some of her to normal size namely: her feet, hair and hands
but he states he will work on a completed version right away, leaving her in this state


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 Post subject: Re: Incredible Shrinking Rebecca (pitch)
PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:39 pm 
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I would have thought she would have tried to slip it to Baloo and a mix up occurs. It would have worked just fine for Baloo, but the mix up reveals it's way too powerful for Rebecca. It wouldn't be the first time she tried to get Baloo to lose weight, so it wouldn't be a surprise if she tried a second time.


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 Post subject: Re: Incredible Shrinking Rebecca (pitch)
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:26 pm 
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that would be a sweet twist ending


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 Post subject: Re: Incredible Shrinking Rebecca (pitch)
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 4:54 pm 
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I suppose it could have a follow up episode where antidote worked too well, now that I think about it.


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 Post subject: Re: Incredible Shrinking Rebecca (pitch)
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:52 pm 
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Ness and Sonic wrote:
I suppose it could have a follow up episode where antidote worked too well, now that I think about it.


that would be sweet
now if someone would do the art and the story


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