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Bandit was a little disappointed that Z wouldn't come. "What's his problem?" Dash asked Bandit. The rest of the gang nodded in agreement with Dash. Bandit just shrugged his shoulders.

"I think he might just be scared of rain," He chuckled. The rest of the gang laughed along with him.

zero snorted annoyed.

"C'mon, let's go," Bandit said, leading his friends down the road. He knew where the Pound was. It was a long trip by van, so it was an even longer trip for dogs. But they had to get there or Elsie was doomed. They all hoped that they wouldn't find any problems on the way, but for this group of dogs, there was always a problem waiting around the corner.

zero yawned making sure to stay at the very back of the hide out so the puddles made by the rain wouldn't get on his paws

Bandit- Travis suddenly froze. He raise his nose to the air and his eyes widened in horror. "Reggie," He whimpered. bandit and the others rolled their eyes.

"Stop being so paranoid," Coco told his brother. Bandit sniffed the air but he couldn't scent Reggie at all.

"I can't smell him either," He said. "It's just a mixed scent."
Travis shrugged it off and followed the others.

Zero- "Tangie, are you in there?" A voice rang into the hideout, a young wolfdog's voice.

his ear twitched "hm?" he moaned

Zero- "Tangie, uncle Bandit, anyone?" The voice called again.

Bandit- Suddenly as they walked into the next street, Reggie jumped out of the shadows. "It's Reggie!" Coco panicked to Travis.

"Duh," Travis said, blankly.

"Make a break for it!" Dash yelled and they all separated. Tangerine and Coco ran down the alley towards the back of Tony's and hid behind a trash can. Bandit and Dash ran towards the park and Travis ran off alone to the hills.

"hey what are you doing here for ?" zero asked remembering who it was now.

Zero- "I came to visit Tangie and the others," Scruff yipped as he entered the hideout.

Bandit- "Guys?" Travis called out. He was all alone and it was getting dark. He gulped. He was a little afraid of the dark, especially when he was on his own. He went to the top of a hill to look around. He couldn't see any of his friends.

Meanwhile

"Coco, you're too close to me," Tangerine choked as Coco squashed her against the fence.

"Sorry, Coco grunted. He could smell Reggie getting closer. He squeezed Tangerines paw for comfort but she immediately snatched her paw away. "Give me a break, I scared of getting ripped to pieces, here," He hissed.

Meanwhile

"I can't run much longer," Dash panted as he ran alongside his friend. Bandit turned and headed for the bridge. Dash was sure he knew what Bandit was planning, and he was right.

"Jump...into...the pond," The doberman gasped between pants. He reached the edge of the bridge, took a deep breath and dived into the pond, followed by Dash. they weren't sure if Reggie was behind them or not, so Bandit raised his head out of the pond. There was no sign of him. He pulled Dash out of the river and set him on the riverbank. "If Reggie isn't chasing us, then he must have gone after the others," Bandit said, worrying for his friends.

"well she not here right now sorry sruff" he replied

Yet another roleplay that lacks plot, characters, and proper posts. mouse101, you're posts are punctuated correctly, but there are still some grammar mistakes that could easily be remedied by a quick reread and edit. batman., you're posts are entirely too short and have no punctuation at all.

Then again, you've both heard this rant before, but you need to learn that a rp needs a plot, characters bios, and posts that are longer than one line. Also, this is forum is for L&TT rps; this rp has nothing to do with Lady, Tramp, Scamp, or Angel, so it belong in the General Private Roleplay section. I've contacted a Mod to move it.

(but didn't you read we have reggie

also i would love to puntate but english isn't my first language so im still learning)

Okay, I didn't see that, so I apologize for that. But, still, the issue could have been avoided if mouse101 had started this rp correctly with a plot stating that Reggie was involved. Then, there would have been no confusion.

Anyways, just to let you know, the beginning of every sentence should start with a capital letter and the ending of every sentence should have either a period (.), exclamation mark (!), or question mark (?). Just these two things will make you posts ten times easier to read and understand. English punctuation can get rather confusing, but these two things are the most important.

I won't lock this Topic but I suggest you two Roleplayers to take a quick look at Black Rose's RolePlay Guite for LATT posted HERE in order to get this RP "fixed", meaning, that it will follow the rules.