Thanks Diego! I,uh, did another one.
As for the story, I made a few changes. Here is the plot;
Sinabi and her brother Nimbala are growing up quickly. But her life has many complications.
For one: Her father is paying more attention to Nimbala than her, often leaving her out.
Two: She got caught in an elephant stampeed and Nimbala saved her. So now he has a better chance at being king.
Three: The hyenas have come back and now there is a shortage of food.
Four: Scar was never killed, he came back and wants revenge along with Shenzi, her daughter, Bonzai and Ed.
Five: He knows that her and her brother are next in line and wants to kill us.
Six: He tries to kill her when she was babysitting Kiara and Kovu's 3 month old cub and almost kills Kivu. (the cub)
Seven: There is a great battle between scar and his hyenas and the lions, but the winner will be a surprise...
So what do you think?