Again, a role-play needs a plot, a character form, and a list of characters. You should wait for other members to join before starting a roleplay, and your style of role-playing is very confusing and not accepted on AS. You must use third person, past tense, paragraph form when writing. Like this:
'"Kiara, the cubs are perfect," Kovu said affectionately.
"Yes, they are," Kiara whispered as she groomed her newborns.
"Huh, this cub has red fur..." Kovu looked from the cub in question to his mate, trying to hide the suspicion in his voice and hoping the odd fur coloring was some sort of distant family resemblance.
Kiara refused to look at Kovu, the guilt building up more and more as she opened her mouth to say, "Kovu, someone mated with me."'
You should also read over your posts to check for SPaG mistakes before submitting it. And, again, one-line posts are against the
RP Rules. I highly recommend you read these two guides! Here are the links again:
Official Roleplay Guide of Animation Source and
Rose's Roleplaying Guide.
~ Black Rose