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Plot The sun just rose on the pridelands a young lioness just woke up to talk to the king,Kovu but something caught her eye Kopa and vitani They were alive and all the lion's were happy but one was not Cinnamon was different he hated Kovu for he was supposed to be king and deep within the boreders Ziras sister Zikira wants to avenge Scar and Zira but out in the grey lands king Choatamo is getting to son's soon and one will save the pride forever.
Rules
1.)Respect all site rules
2.)Teen chars cant have mates or cubs everything else is fine
3.)Write like you would in scool
4.)2+ sentences
5.)No kiling eachother without that persons permission
chars
Takuna takuna115
Kiara
Kovu
Tolo takuna115
Tikana
Kopa
Vitani
nala
simba
Viratani
koren
Arnaya
toko
zakira
chotamo
Cinamin
Char form
Name
Pride
family
likes
Dislikes
History
Apearance
My chars
Name Takuna
Pride Pridelands
Family Kiara(mom) Kovu(dad) Tikana(sister) Koren(brother) Arnaya(sister) Tolo(mate)
Likes her mom,Tolo,being alone,story's
Dislikes Zira,Zikira,when her dad yells at her
History She was born first out of three cubs she was always called the prettiest lioness in the pride lands her dad Kovu always wanted her to be the queen because of her spirt knowing she was like Uru strong but kind.
Apearance she has aquamarine eye's and light brown fur and a pale brown underpelt and black bangs and black tail and a scar.
Name Tolo
Pride outlander then turns Pridelander
Family Yuai(mom) Choatamo(dad) Toko(brother) Ari(sister) Takuna(mate)
Likes Takuna,Zikira,Toko,history of the pridelands
Dislikes Choatamo,Zikira,Scar
History He was born last to Yuai and Chotamo his older brother liked him and made a promise to his mom that he would always protect him so she was proud he always looked up to Toko but one day his father left him in the pridelands to die in his old home but Toko found him and raised him but Zikira found him and raised them for her revenge.
Apearance he has sky blue eye's and chocolate brown fur and a wood brown underpelt and a dark grey mane.

Again, a role-play needs a plot, a character form, and a list of characters. You should wait for other members to join before starting a roleplay, and your style of role-playing is very confusing and not accepted on AS. You must use third person, past tense, paragraph form when writing. Like this:

'"Kiara, the cubs are perfect," Kovu said affectionately.

"Yes, they are," Kiara whispered as she groomed her newborns.

"Huh, this cub has red fur..." Kovu looked from the cub in question to his mate, trying to hide the suspicion in his voice and hoping the odd fur coloring was some sort of distant family resemblance.

Kiara refused to look at Kovu, the guilt building up more and more as she opened her mouth to say, "Kovu, someone mated with me."'

You should also read over your posts to check for SPaG mistakes before submitting it. And, again, one-line posts are against the RP Rules. I highly recommend you read these two guides! Here are the links again: Official Roleplay Guide of Animation Source and Rose's Roleplaying Guide.

~ Black Rose