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Bright rays of color lit up the sky as the dawn of a new era had begun in the Pride Lands where King Simba ruled along with his serene mate, Queen Nala.

There on that base, walked out the four lions, in a single row.

In Kiara's mouth, she's carrying a cub and his name is Maraki (African for "ruler").

I made that up.

But in the Out Lands, there is another lioness who is giving birth.

This one can fool anyone into thinking that she's a Pride Lander because of the color of her fur and the round heart shaped nose.

Her name is Mitkiyah.

Her own brother had tried to kill her so, she was just running and ended up in the Out Lands. Her brother was a bad ruler. He had made the lionesses hunt, even though, some were hurt.

She had heard of the magical Pride Lands and had to come, in the hopes of being rescued.

'Maybe, this pride will accept me', she thought.

"And hopefully, they'll accept Naavah too."

Kovu is lounging around outside. "Who's going hunting today......?"

Kiara: I can't go because I just had the cub. Vitani, you're the second leading huntress......

She's already running down the slopes.

Curious eyes followed Vitani.

Mitkiyah goes back to the Out Lands.

"ROAR......!"

The hyenas and Maliki all jumped at once!

"ROOOOOOOOARRRRRRRRR.....................!"

Vitani lifted her head up. She had definitely heard the roar. It sounded like a dying antelope so, she raced towards the source only to find several hyenas and a lion gaining up on a lioness. She digs her claws into his back and sends him flying.

"How dare you wound someone......!?!"

The male glares at her. "None of your business! Now, scram before I kill ya too......!"

"King Simba will be mad about this......!"

"Tell your king...... that Maliki's in the Pride Lands!"

Vitani scurried off and he raises his eyebrow at her flailing tail. "Hm, very spunky. I wonder if she's a good fighter."

Vitani, with the cub in her mouth, ran up the Pride Rock. She catches the lionesses' attention.

Mitdikah, a former Outlander approaches her and asks, "Vitani what are you doing with that cub and where did you get it......!?!"

Simba also wonders about who this new stranger is.

Before she had left the sight of the dead lioness, she had heard her whisper, "Navaah......"

"Simba, this cub is abandoned. I saw the rogue kill her mother!"

Kiara: That's horrible......!

Simba: Who...... is this rogue......!?!

I like it so far. Very nice. I love the plot.
In some constructive criticism, I think that some of the parts felt a bit rushed,
Like instead of just saying "maybe this pride will Exept me" she thought
You should add some more to it, like:'she thought, resting her head on her paws.
It would just give it a more full feel to it.
But other than that, awesome! Great job.