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 Post subject: Who's That Girl?-New Story by RBL-Prologue
PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 10:12 am 
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Prologue
The purebred white-and-black female wolf walked slowly towards the edge of the riverbank, her curly midnight-black tail up as if she sensed something wasn't right. Her mate had been gone for about 3 weeks now and she was getting very worried.
Suddenly, she heard a playful, female-type laugh from the other end of the riverbank. She looked up and suddenly wished she hadn't... because there, curled up next to a burgundy-and-beige-colored female Husky/wolf mix was her mate!
"B... B... Beck?!!" She stuttered, stumbling over her own words as shock hit her then. Her moussy-brown and light tan mate raised his head.
"Ja-" He started to say, but was cut off suddenly as the black-and-white wolf dashed back towards the den at full speed, tears blurring her vision. She reached her den and collapsed to the ground in violent, shaky sobs.
'How could he?! I thought I MEANT something to him... I thought he LOVED me!!! But... I guess I was wrong. All those nuzzles, all those licks, all those sayings of 'I Love You...' they were LIES!! And to think I had 2 litters with him!!!' The female thought angrily.
She fell asleep that night, not knowing that someone else was curled up next to her... someone who would change her life in the worst way possible...

(If I get good reviews, I might put the first chapter up. If you have any suggestions to make my writing... you know... a little better or a little more descriptive, just post it here. Please don't be afraid to be honest, but say it in a nice way. I do NOT appreciate comments like, "Oh, this isn't good. You shouldn't be writing at all" or maybe even, "Oh, this sucks. Get off the site, you horrible writer." Now, these aren't the comments I get, but please don't say them AT ALL. I appreciate comments and suggestions. :))

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