I can feel her conflict as if I was her. Nice Fic!

That was a really good Fanfic, you should make more

Wow this fan fic is amazing. Her feelings were actually pretty good and very detailed. You really showed how she was fighting a losing battle for a lion she could admit that she loved. Zemar was probably along those lines when he found out he liked Akasha too. Question is will he let Jia go off and be happy so he can have his own happiness. I think the awnser to that is plainly obvious DUH XD . Anyway this is a great fan fic Nama and thank you so much for this i really do like it :3

Awww this was a very good fanfic. Akasha's struggle over what she thinks of Zemar is very realistic and well-detailed too. You can feel her feeling complicated over whether she does just like Zemar as a friend or possible wants more than that. And your writing... I love the detail put into describing some things, such as when Akasha leaves the cave to go to think. It's not detailed to the point where it would be prose, but it's detailed to where it tells you what the setting is like, but you can always imagine it yourself. I hope that makes sense 'cause that sounded better in my head xD

I love it ^^