The Chosen Foal

Author : Spirit Horse

Date sent : January 30, 2013

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Other

Description : Anais is an 8 month foal who has white fur and a dark red rose on her fore head. She lives a regular life until she walkes back to her herd after a race with her brother and finds every one bowing to her. Thats when her life changes. When she lives in fear. But not for herself.

Length : Short -

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PG (Parental guidance suggested)

The Chosen Foal

By Spirit Horse

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Cali	November 15, 2014

Omg asmome make more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Guest	March 29, 2013

Thanks you guys! I will take your advice and seperate my next story. Thank you Demeter! JAWC, thanks soooooo much! I am writing a new one. I'm always writing in first person veiw so it's natural for me.

Please give me future advice please every one!


JustAWri terChick	March 29, 2013

Wow, your stories are amazing but as Demeter said, you should practice paragraph separating ; )
Since Anias is still a shaman I think you should most definitely continue it, this storyline and the characters are amazing and entertaining. I envy your ability to sound so natural when you write in first person


Jaydenxx	March 25, 2013

	what.

Hmm... Maybe you should put all of this into paragraphs, that would help a lot to keep it organized. :D Great story BTW. xD

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