And you say you're a bad writer! Jeeze!

Well, this is definintely a change in the characters from the movies.
Glad you had Aleu come back!

why does kidi have to be gay? not very pleased, but sooo good!

Yeah, no offince- But this really offinces ME. How their all like "eww! thats sick!" I take that personaly. But... I can't complain, or this will get deleted LOL. So over all I like it, thumbs up. :]

wow the new parts are um nteresting want to see what happens its a
good fanfic!!!

interesting.... good.... some parts kind of wrong... but still good

I kinda like your storys but they are wrong, and making poor kodi look
like a gay guy is infuriating. I`m a very big fan of all the
characters in Balto...Except Steele, so you could make a bad one about
him...Not that your storys are bad.

Also I kinda like
these so I`m looking forward to the next one. Also, instead of writing
a whole series without puting other ones in, may I sugest you make a
few others too. Not that I`m telling you what to do or anything like
that, I`m just saying that adding other fanfics would be a good
idea.

These are good fanfics anyway and I think you will
have a future in writing storys

Nope...uh uh. I have to tell you, I DON'T like how some members of
this site are using Kodi to promote some gay agenda. It really is
infuriating, how this character is so abused by a small handful of
fans. And then, to turn Balto and Jenna into gay bashers is even
worse.

Sorry - I always try to give every writer
the benefit of the doubt, but this is wrong in every way that is
possible. The entire story arc. Just as every other fan fiction
portraying Kodi (or any other Balto character) as gay is. Alternative
sexuality fan fictions, in my opinion, have no place here. And it
doesn't make me a gay basher for saying so. It DOES make me loyal to
the characters in their truest form...and deeply offended, as a loyal
fan, when this stuff is perpetrated.

I'd like to see
other stuff from you, so that I could have a chance to give you some
positive critiquing, but not if all of it is going to be like this.

wowvery interesting fanfic A little odd not crazy sbout Kodi being gay
but its interesting

I actually found myself liking these fanfics. They're a little mature,
but they're great. Can't wait to read the next part(s).