Verge of Betrayal

Author : CatWhoHas14Tails

Date sent : September 21, 2006

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : Every protagonist has a rival! And Kita is Kiona's rival. This is Kita's story, explaining her hate for Kiona and her love for Achak and she gained entry in his pack. ALL CHARACTERS ARE COPYRIGHTED BY THEIR RESPECTFUL OWNERS.

Length : Short -

Characters :

Kayiya	Kita	Wit	Jerome	Achak	Kanook
Kiona

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Verge of Betrayal

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Baltobol twolf	January 05, 2010

cool story! you should make a sequel. i cant belive that her own sister would leave her to die well kita did try to over throw her sister


Baltoand alue12	October 02, 2009

i love this story ive read it about 134475 times do not ask why...because ill tell you!

i liked it


Kiveah	December 24, 2008

I'm so glad you didn't just make Kita a bitch for no reason. :D


Rebel�	January 12, 2008

I finally decided to read this, after seeing the Kita pic in
your image gallery XD And it was just freaking awesome.
Gotta feel sorry for Kita. D: Great idea! Loved it so much.
:D


Skygirl	October 06, 2007

AHHHHHHH, Kiona has an enemy! I wonder if she knows about
it, or if Achak does....

It's great so far, I
can't wait for more on this one!


Haruhi	September 24, 2007

So this is Kita's story? Now I like her more and feel sorry
for her D=


[[Naggie !]]	August 14, 2007

oops, i meant the verge of betrayal not it ends
tonight...


Deleted member 5490	August 10, 2007

Cool!I would like to know what happens afterward!


[[Naggie !]]	July 20, 2007

MAKE THE SEAQUEL!!!!!!

I've got meh eyes on
you!


Deleted member 3152	June 12, 2007

I liked this story. It was interesting, but Kita was kind of
annoying. I guess I should have pity for her, though I don't
think Achak loves her in that way. I don't know how to
pronounce her sis's name!

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