, thanks everyone for the awesome comments! I'm glad you all enjoy the renders That's what takes so long for my updates, though! Yes, Geno is too uptight, and Gurri is too careless. Bambi and Faline raised horrible kids XD

New chapter coming soon. I sent it in, just waiting for it to be approved

Your renders are just wonderful. ^^ Veey nice characterization; Bambi being Geno's foil is great! x3

I don't like it.. I love it. I love the expression on Geno's face. ^^

Wha- WHAT?! Has Gurri gone insane?! I'm totally okay with it if she risks HER neck. She's an adult, if she gets hurt while doing this, as cruel as it sounds, it's her own fault. I expect an adult to be responsible enough to know how far she can go. But involving her little siblings in it - even I wouldn't do that. Granted, mum never told me to babysit Kat (nickname of my sis), but...I would have never done that!

Phew...you managed to get me mad at a character, great work. (I'm serious on that one, I really admire writers who manage to do that.)

Well...Bambi is a little bit TOO careless in my opinion, but he's the prince, he's old enough to know what he does.
Stinkweed and Bumper are really some interesting friends. ^^
And Geno and Rags were just too adorable, I love that scene.

One thing I really adore about this fanfic are the images. It's like a book, they give you a sneak peek of the story and they're well done, so, one more point in their favour!
Stinkweed really is some guy xD poor Geno! And I like the fact that Bambi isn't a negative guy, laughing about his missing antler haha xD chill down Geno, he's not gonna die!