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Post subject: Re: Second Lesson from RTW!  Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:16 pm |
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To RTW:
I agree with everything you put up there, but what about the narrator that can only focus on one character's mind? Like this~
Trey listened to Nina's words, though couldn't fully understand the lesson she was teaching him. He always wondered what was going on in that incredible noggin of hers.
What I mean is that the narrator is telling what Trey thinks, but Nina's thoughts go indefinite. Would that be third person?
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