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silver wolf
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Post subject: write your poems here Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 5:40 am |
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Joined: Fri Sep 02, 2005 7:18 pm Posts: 744 Location: canada
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Wilderness and sacrement.
Naked in midwinter magic
Lies an an angel in the snow
The frozen figure crossed by tracks of wolves
An encounter, symbolic, yet trthful
With a hungery choir of woods
An agreement immemorial to be born
Dulcet eleven harps from a dry forest
Accompany all charming tunes
Of a sacrement by a camp fire
A promise between the tameless
And the one with a tool
Tonight the journey from my cave begins
I want to hunt with the tameless heart
I want to learn the wisdom of mountains afar
We wil honor the angel in the snow
We will make the streams for our children flow
Wrapped in furs beneath the northern lights
From my cave i watch the land untamed
And wonder if some becoming season
Will the angel melt in shame.
By Silver Wolf.
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Dreaming Wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:58 am |
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Joined: Thu Oct 13, 2005 7:09 pm Posts: 1205 Location: Floyd, Virginia
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The Wolf
Written by Dreaming Wolf
The moonlight shines on fields and trees
And makes them brilliant blue
And somewhere in that silent night
The Wolf is nearby too
His presence goes unnoticed
His shadow is not seen
But if the moonlight touches him
His coat gives off a gleam
He walks without a sound
No leaf or twig will break
Because his quiet prowness
Will keep until daybreak
And when the moon shall fall
And the silence will be ceised
In his glory he will howl
And put fear in every beast
And yet The Wolf so strong
His figure undefined
Cannot defeat the humans
And the sickness of their minds
But The Wolf will stay a fighter
To endure until his end
And when the land is finaly safe
He will reign there once again
And The Wolf will stay alive as well
For his journey has not been run
And he'll live to see another day
Under the rising and setting sun
And the mountains turned to yellow amber
As the setting sun did set
And the skies were bathed in golden red
As only the wild could get
And the moon shone down upon the fields
And the tree tops turned dark blue
And somewhere in the shadows
The wolf stood nearby too
And he looked up at the shining stars
And howled out to the moon
For he knew his time was coming
His reign would start here soon
_________________ Fruit Loops are gay Cheerios. Yummeh <3
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Silver Snow
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:55 pm |
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Joined: Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:25 pm Posts: 574 Location: Dee dee Dee
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Very nice,
well even if I didn't make this small poem I'll still post it since I like it so much,
Don't walk behind me I may not lead,
Don't walk infront of me I may not follow,
just.................
Walk beside me.
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Dreaming Wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 2:33 pm |
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Joined: Thu Oct 13, 2005 7:09 pm Posts: 1205 Location: Floyd, Virginia
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OOo, I like that one! 
_________________ Fruit Loops are gay Cheerios. Yummeh <3
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 2:56 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm Posts: 1109 Location: Misery
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:15 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm Posts: 1109 Location: Misery
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Um,this really has no title..and it doesn't rhime..  much...
Black pebbles...
Thunderstorms..
tonight..is black...
but in the norms...
The black wolf sleeps....
In the black forest deep...
Night creeps over the trees
And along comes a nightly breeze...
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Last edited by BlackwolfWSP on Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:28 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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DarkMountain
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:15 pm |
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Joined: Thu Feb 17, 2005 6:31 pm Posts: 106 Location: Utah, USA
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Here are a few of mine, I have lots more...
Bloody Tears
A heart so cold,
A soul so black,
Would ever know,
That a g irl like this
Had ever known
A warm and loving glow.
Hands touch,
Eyes meet,
Two souls unite.
Long ago,
She too,
Walked in the light.
But right now,
She is lonely,
No one is here,
No one is here to dry
Her B loody Tears.
A heart so cold,
A soul so black.
No one will ever be here
To dry those b loody tears.
Can You Not See
I am hidden from view
Can you not see
I am waiting for you
To find me
I can not be heard
By anothers ears
I am waiting for you
To listen
I am able to feel nothing
Of anothers touch
I am waiting for your
Embrace
I am waiting
Can you not see
I am waiting
For you,
For you...
To free me
My Last Goodbye
If this is being read
I have recently passed
From the realm of the living to the land of the d ead
I am now just a piece of the past.
To the few who care, you need not grieve
My time had come, it was my choice to leave.
No longer could I stand the constant pain,
That resides in my heart, overwhelms me with disdain.
Throughout the years I was alive,
Innumerable tears I did cry.
With each day my sadness deepened,
And my will to live slowly weakened.
Emptiness was all I could feel,
Happiness and sanity became all but real.
I know my actions can not be undone,
But please believe I meant to hurt no one.
My last request is that this be looked at not as the end,
Rather a new begining, for on the otherside we will meet again.
Let not sadness reach your heart, nor tears graze your eyes,
And know that I sincerely appoligize.
Finally ask not the question "Why?"
Just accept this as my last good bye.
_________________ I'm a g irl!!! Get it right already, people!
Last edited by DarkMountain on Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:29 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:19 pm |
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DarkMountain
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:30 pm |
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Joined: Thu Feb 17, 2005 6:31 pm Posts: 106 Location: Utah, USA
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BlackwolfWSP wrote: Wow...Dm!!I loved those poems!!!You inspired me!! 
Thanks!  My mother says I should become a poet when I grow up. 
_________________ I'm a g irl!!! Get it right already, people!
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:33 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm Posts: 1109 Location: Misery
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DarkMountain wrote: BlackwolfWSP wrote: Wow...Dm!!I loved those poems!!!You inspired me!!  Thanks!  My mother says I should become a poet when I grow up. 
You should if you really want to!^^  I just became a fan of poetry^^I need TONS of work..But I'm gonna try and post another poem on here.. 
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DarkMountain
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:37 pm |
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Joined: Thu Feb 17, 2005 6:31 pm Posts: 106 Location: Utah, USA
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BlackwolfWSP wrote: DarkMountain wrote: BlackwolfWSP wrote: Wow...Dm!!I loved those poems!!!You inspired me!!  Thanks!  My mother says I should become a poet when I grow up.  You should if you really want to!^^  I just became a fan of poetry^^I need TONS of work  my poems look like a 4 year old wrote em,or something.. 
Practice makes perfect! I have been writing poems since I was 8 years old, and I have majorly improved since then.  My only advice is never give up, and whenever you get an idea, make sure you write it down!!
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:38 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm Posts: 1109 Location: Misery
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Thanks for the advice.^^Heres another one..
Come out from hiding
A mask,covers her face.
The lies,they cover up her mistakes.
She hides beneath the surface of the dark.
And nooned can find her.
She's made her mark...
I try to find her,she's never there.
Or so I think....
But where?
She's never there....
She hides...
And her lies...
Her fait they decide...
She's lost...
But she needs to come out from hiding..
No longer can she let her lies do the deciding....
(OK..so that was kind of more of a song..) 
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silver wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:15 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 02, 2005 7:18 pm Posts: 744 Location: canada
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WOW!
ASOME!!! poems everyone keep doing more and more untill you cant do anymore
By Silver Wolf.
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