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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 11:54 pm 
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Here's my newest completed work. There's some pretty heavy subject material, so I put it in spoiler tags.


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I'd love to hear your thought on it.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 2:14 am 
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Hope you like. Opinions appreciated.

==================================
Weathering This Storm
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Black clouds of modern despair
Spread across all our horizons
Deep within a torrent of souls
Storm will be here at this time tomorrow
And we must see this through
If we are to start this over again
Begin to mend all the severed ties

As the torrential rains pour down
Like waterfalls of our emotion
We try to make sense of this all
And settle our differences in vain
Flashes of lightning shoot down
Through a fault line in the heavens
Slashing through the grey skies
With a commanding untamed fury

As we buckle down the shelter doors
And lock the windows of the soul
We must stand up to this hellish fight
Weathering these storms of regret
Against the ways of a world lost
We must not relent if we want to
Ever see another chance for light
We cannot fail in this eternal fight
We must weather these storms of life

As if true divinity was never meant to be
Electrical currents flow like the blood
Through the gentle rivers of our very souls
Water like all the vain tears we've shed
Drenches the earth in our eternal sorrow
And acid like fire like drops of liquid pain
Paints a picture of world with no tomorrows

As we burn through all the yesterdays
Life seems to stand us here frozen solid
Deep within these once hallowed grounds
As the snowstorms settle in upon us now
The cold of winter's biting chill surrounds
And all hope of another day drifts away
Astray on the back of a lonesome snowflake

As we buckle down the shelter doors
And lock the windows of the soul
We must stand up to this hellish fight
Weathering these storms of regret
Against the ways of a world lost
We must not relent if we want to
Ever see another chance for light
We cannot fail in this eternal fight
We must weather these storms of life

Redemption so far away but oh so close
That you can almost taste its sweet reward
But the maker's hand says there's hell to pay
If you cannot resist your temptations and
This inner devil you know called impulse
Static signals of noise blare through the sirens
Shattering all of your disharmonious silence

As we buckle down the shelter doors
And lock the windows of the soul
We must stand up to this hellish fight
Weathering these storms of regret
Against the ways of a world lost
We must not relent if we want to
Ever see another chance for light
We cannot fail in this eternal fight
We must weather these storms of life

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Poisoned


I can see a glimpse of the future
Through these shattered window panes
But I won't stay here forever
Locked inside these rusted chains
I can almost hear all the faithful
Through the static as they rise
But the past is far from over
And today is my demise

I can hear you faithfully whisper
"Everything will be alright"
Make it happen now or never
So I know I'll hold you tight
Though you left me here tonight

Locked inside the evanescence
Of my faint, diluted mind
Don't leave me far behind

Let me be the things that I'm destined to be
Let me fall from victory to agony
I will stand for the tears that I have cried
Just don't leave me locked inside

As the shadows fall all around me
I can hear them call my name
Though I'm sitting here in safety
I know I'm the one to blame
I can almost feel how I'm fragile
But this lifeblood--still it flows
It disguises how I faltered
In the broken path I chose

I can hear you faithfully whisper
"Everything will be alright"
Make it happen now or never
So I know I'll hold you tight
Though you left me here tonight

Locked inside the evanescence
Of my faint, diluted mind
Don't leave me far behind

Let me be the things that I'm destined to be
Let me fall from victory to agony
I will stand for the tears that I have cried
Just don't leave me locked inside
Let me know that things are not all that they seem
Let me rise again, let me realize a dream
I'll still fall--in your arms is where I'll die
Cus there's nothing left inside

Through the window, I see all the ashes
Through the window, there's nothing but flame
I can hear you speak my name
But I can't break away from fixation
And I know that I'm going insane
Now I'll never be the same

Let me be the things that I'm destined to be
Let me fall from victory to agony
I will stand for the tears that I have cried
Just don't leave me locked inside
Let me know that things are not all that they seem
Let me rise again, let me realize a dream
I'll still fall--in your arms is where I'll die
Cus there's nothing left inside

Tear me down to nothing and throw me away
Give me truths that give me but nothing to say
Never mind--in your arms is where I'll die
Though you left me here tonight

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