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Lucius (FA)


Lucius (FA)

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Created by : -WildWolf-

Main type : Fan character

Realistic? : Realistic

Used in a fan creation? : Used in a fan creation

Permission to use : Protected

Animal/Human type : Wolf

Gender : Male

Character details : Many details

Main color : Dark grey

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Detail Lucius (FA)

Name: Lucius 

Species: Gray Wolf

Gender: Male

Parents: Niju (adoptive father)

Siblings: Unknown 

Mate/Crush: None (Closed)

Pups: None

Personality: Lucius is not the most social guy you'll meet, he is rather aggressive and may sometimes snap even for the smallest, and when he gets mad you better get as far away from him as possible. He can be very mean sometimes, he doesn't really think what he says and neither does he have any regards for the feelings of others. Lucius is a very closed guy, who only looks out for himself and doesn't trust anyone, and especially doesn't want to let anyone near him.  He is a smart wolf, he can't be fooled easily and he knows right away when someone doesn't have good intensions. Lucius has excellent fighting skills, he never backs away from a challenge and rather dies than is called a coward, and he pretty much is a loner who doesn't want other wolves around him, he travels the forests alone, and other animals are somewhat afraid of him, mainly because of his aggressiveness even though he's never really hurt anyone.

History: Lucius didn't have the happiest childhood, his father was a very aggressive wolf with mental problems and one night, when Lucius was only 4 weeks old he witnessed his father murder his mother as a result of a bad fight between them. The little pup fled, and pretty soon he ran into a black wolf by the name of Niju, a rogue who had just left his pack. After hearing what had happened, Niju agreed to take care of Lucius, and he would never have to return to his horrible father again. Lucius was somewhat hesitant at first, but after a while he learned to trust Niju, and in time he accepted him as his father. Niju raised Lucius as his own son, he taught him to fight and hunt, and everything else he needed to know about surviving in life. Finally, he had grown into a handsome, strong adult wolf, but, when he turned two years, one day he wondered why Niju took so long when he went hunting. Lucius went looking for him, only to find him dead on the snow, covered in blood. Lucius was shocked, horrofied and he swore he would find whoever had done this and avenge his adoptive father. Just then, a large, black wolf walked up to him, and explained he knew how Lucius felt. The wolf introduced himself as Logan, and said he was planning to form a pack, offering Lucius a chance to join him. Lucius hesitated, but eventually accepted the offer and became friends with Logan. Lucius somewhat found in Logan a soul brother, and a faithful companion and he was his right paw, the only one he truly trusted. As they were gathering allies to conquer new territories, Lucius became the alpha and he made Logan the omega. They became a popular pack that anyone would have wanted to join, and Lucius was a loved leader and alpha. One night Logan came to wake him up, and said he needed to show Lucius something. Without a doubt in his mind he followed Logan, who seemed to be leading him deeper and deeper into the forest, and finally he stopped, and Lucius asked him why he'd brought him there. Logan just stood there, with his back turned, and said he was going to do something he should've done a long time ago. With that, he lunged at Lucius, sunking his teeth into his neck and pinned him to the ground. Lucius yelped, as Logan kept biting harder and harder, and told him there was now a new leader in the pack. Lucius couldn't believe Logan was a traitor, but he time to think about it due to the pain he was feeling, when Logan tightened his hold and now, his two other pack mates showed up, only to reveal they were in the same plot. They beat him up ruthlessely, and when Lucius was finally lying in the ground, half death and nearly unconscious, Logan walked up to him, and told him the pack needed a much more strict and rough leader. With his last strenght, Lucius lifted his head, calling Logan a dirty traitor, and then he blacked out, just barely managing to see him and the others walking away, leaving him for dead. Lucius propably would have died, unless he hadn't been found by two hunters, who took him to an animal care center where his wounds were healed almost completely, all though he did still remain some scars. When he was healed, they released him back to the wild, and after this, Lucius decided he'd never trust anyone again, he started living as a rogue and planning a revenge on Logan.

Relation to Balto: Niju's adopted son.

Head base (c) Killer Bee



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February 14, 2013
Shoutbox Moderator, Articles mod Finland Female Is not currently on the site
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Yeah, I'm cool. And I think it's good you speak your mind, Jersey, this whole thing just somewhat got out of hand with some people, but I guess they were trying to defend me, I dunno.

But as long as you and I are cool, that is just fine.

February 14, 2013
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O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
I'm cool with that if you are, Fallen. You know I tend to like most of your stuff. I personally have no real problem with this. I think that I simply felt the need to speak up for the people whom the white knights were, once AGAIN, unfairly attacking.

You know it's all good between us. Or you should. So no worries.

February 14, 2013
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Claire, thanks so much! And Jersey, as far as I'm concerned, this whole situation can just be forgotten. The reason I reacted to the comment in such a powerful way is that things have NOT been easy for me lately.

February 11, 2013
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Lone Wolf who protects others
Fallen Your character is very lovely and creative :3

February 10, 2013
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O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
"I don't get why everyone is complaining about him" :icon331: Don't fuel a fire that some of us have worked hard to extinguish. As Natti said, no one was complaining. A debate arose out of one of the typical misunderstandings that riddle this site, thanks to several unnecessary overreactions.

February 10, 2013
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Water Tribe
No one was complaining, Alue15. A member posted a nuetral comment and it sparked a debate. That's all. XD

February 10, 2013
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-FallenAngel- He's such a wonderful character I love his back story .... I don't get why everyone is complaining about him, Ignore the negative comments, Thats what I do.

February 09, 2013
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Water Tribe
-nods-

I don't think anyone here ever said that this was a bad character. A sad/dark/depressing backstory does not automatically make a bad character. Some people give their characters a darker history on purpose, and it seems to me like that's exactly what you were trying to do, seeing as you specifically stated that you didn't want to have a character with another typical happy-happy-joy-joy ending, and that is absolutely OK. But, that being said, I don't quite understand why you would be so hurt over someone pointing out that a character has a depressing story when you were :trying: to not give said character a happy ending.

Being able to accept other people's opinions is an important skill in life as well as a mark of maturity. Being able to accept their criticisms is even more so. But before you can do either, you have to understand the difference between a true attack, a constructive criticism, and a mere neutral comment. Grouping the latter two in the same category as the foremost will only lead to drama and hurt feelings, mostly on your own behalf. If you're going to let yourself be hurt and offended by a simple comment, then well, to be quite honest, maybe you should consider not posting your work online.

Trust me here--as an artist, character creator, and occasionally even writer, I know how good it feels to get one's work praised. I get absolutely ecstatic when I see a new positive comment on my work. But if I got upset or hurt or offended every time someone posted a comment that wasn't a praise, I would only be setting myself up for unnecessary negative feelings, making myself look immature (to varying levels depending on exactly how I replied), and in the case of constructive criticisms, limiting myself and slowing improvement.

Now, please note, I am not trying to offend/insult you nor your work with this comment. I am merely making a point that I hope that you can take to heart. Thank you.

February 09, 2013
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O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
I think the problem here is that people are all too quick to jump to conclusions and be ultra-defensive and hypersensitive when someone critiques or comments on their characters in any way that isn't viewed, by their own standards (and those of others who have similar reactivity), as supportive and positive.

Now, while I too have no problems with this character at all, I agree with Natti that I see no intention on Mighty's part to do harm. Yes, she was blunt, and she offered no real critique or observations on how to change it, but I see no attack. At all. Try not to be like so many members on here and presume that anything negative is an attack on you and your work. Really, the character is fine, but the bio is, in truth, on the depressing, negative, dark side of things. Is that a criticism? Not really...it's just an observation which made reading this character a bit of an emotional sinkhole.

Granted, contrarily, not every character can be made of pure sunshine and happy thoughts. That would be as unrealistic as characters made of pure darkness and despair. Neither is the case here. So don't fret over a blunt observation. Analyze it and decide for yourself what is best.

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February 09, 2013
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February 09, 2013
Shoutbox Moderator, Articles mod Finland Female Is not currently on the site
Big bad mods.
Thank you, RJ. That felt nice :)

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