Feather: , that's exactly what I was going for with Gurri Just a boy-crazy teenager XD She's the polar opposite of her all-work-and-no-play brother, Geno. Not sure if I'm going to have anymore human characters in this story; just a few more stags that I might be making (unless someone has a really great one that works for the story!) And yes, Sally has the coolest job ever ^_^ Who wouldn't want a job where they get to play in the woods all day looking for animals?

MLW: Oh yes. Faline is a mom now so she has a completely different personality. I guess that's what marriage and motherhood does to a gal!

Two things I want to add to my comment:
1) You don't mess with Faline...she's a kick ass mother now. ^^
2) It's forbidden to look Death in the face? Ummm...Soleil, dear, you have a problem. XD

You know, I read it again, and gosh, the more I learn of the characters, the stronger I feel about them. You have very realistic depictions in the main characters - flaws, strengths. Gurri is SO typical of a teenage girl(Show of hands - who here HASN'T met a boy-crazy girl? Yeah, I thought not xD), and Geno is so uptight and determined.

I'd love to add a character myself. May even take a shot at a human if there's room, but I'm not dead-set on it.


Geez, I so love Sally's job. xD

sorry.. I am VERY Clumsy today...

Sorry. It's late and I've been translating the whole day. (Your new chapter, and I'm translating Untaken and HftN again to get rid of a few errors and exchange a few words against hunter's jargon.) ^^

Actually, I answered that question here: /bambi/en/chars/Ragamuffin/36559.html on Rag's character page But yeah, I did answer it!

FL 101: If I may answer for Roach: look up the comments to the last chapter, she said it there.

Roach, When will brook and Lumsters ( lumi) appear? I'm in a curious mood today.

Saske: You think they'd try to be more responsible but Lord love 'em, they're still naughty does XD

MLW: Oh yeah, punishment ensues in the next chapter XD And it was all Gurri's fault. Raven has the mental capacity of a toddler, since he's just a baby. If Gurri (who is the equivalent of a 15 year old girl) had been watching him better instead of watching the stags, he wouldn't have wandered off. Anyways, thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really love the fact that most fanfic writers try to keep to the original novels or movies by making Man an enigma; a shadow or gunshot in the distance. I wanted the deer to take a closer look at Man; to see that there is a difference between a hunter and a spectator; between a poacher and an animal rights activist. I also decided to make my main human character a hot guy, as opposed to most people who make their human OC a hot chick. I'm pleased with that decision ^__^

Feathervenom: Thanks! We'll take a closer look into the lives of my human OCs in a later chapter. Eric, Tommy, Sally and Vic all have special lives and profiles, and since they'll probably be deleted if I make them character pages, I'll probably just describe their bios in one of the later chapters.

Hige: Thank you!

Great chapter, I cant wait for the next one!