Untaken Path: Ch 17 - The Thunder Breaks

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : December 30, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : After final preparations for the rut are made, Trar launches his attack on Bambi's herd.

Length : Short -

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Untaken Path: Ch 17 - The Thunder Breaks
By Feathervenom

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January 05, 2013
Uk Is not currently on the site
Wow!! :)

December 31, 2012
Uk Female Is not currently on the site
Feather.. O.O

December 31, 2012
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CH 17 again, for MLW!

December 31, 2012
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Hige... I once rated at 80 words per minute in typing class. XD

December 31, 2012
Uk Female Is not currently on the site
...You type so fast! I could never work that quickly! Im so lazy X"DD I havent even started the next chap of The Calling of Starlight. *Facedesk*

December 31, 2012
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I think I can fit one in now, Faline. I think Kale might show up once or twice.

I'm glad you all like it! ^^

Anyway, the next chapter is in progress right now. It'll likely be out later tonight. I just need to drag it out a liiiiiittle moooooorrrrrre and then the chapter will be done.

December 31, 2012
Uk Female Is not currently on the site
Woah that was fast X"DD Eh I spottted a Yew lol The tensions really building..Its obvious. Cant wait for the final showdown!

December 31, 2012
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Wow. I could really feel the tension the characters were feeling. Battle is to come. We know it, they know it. I just hope with all my might...I just hope everything goes well, I just hope Kaiser and Skander don't die, as well as Herla, Ronno, Bambi and...about everyone from Bambi's herd (though I don't think they all will...)
Noir and Kaiser? Adorable, cute. They are just a lovely couple, nothing else to say.
The stuff with Korin and the other preparations? Clever, really.
The "scene" with Ronno and Bambi? Brilliant, I love it.

And now...all we can do is pray for Bambi's herd...

December 31, 2012
Usa Is not currently on the site
hmm I would like to make a character for your fanfic. Good chapter

December 31, 2012
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Chapter 17. Probably what I'd consider pretty heart-warming for literally stopping right before the battle...

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