Untaken Path: Ch 18 - The Great Battle

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : December 31, 2012

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Epic

Description : Bambi's army must fight for their most basic survival.

Length : Short -

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Untaken Path: Ch 18 - The Great Battle
By Feathervenom

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January 05, 2013
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Thanks, JL! ^^ So have you come back to the source? Haven't heard from you for awhile!

January 05, 2013
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o.O wow it felt like my heart stopped beating. That's a way to keep tension!!!

January 03, 2013
Usa Is not currently on the site
Please hope for Kale not to die. oh yea Kale is going to mate with another doe. I can put her up for adoption.

December 31, 2012
Uk Female Is not currently on the site
...........*Is frozen in awe* That was.. AMAZING! I could literally feel the tension building, and I couldnt stop reading! Yay Trars dead..But *Gulps* They still have to defeat Nacht..
Wonder if Skanders up to something...
Oh look*Points* Huckleberry's fighting ^-^ Its really sad that Fleetfoot is bleeding to death before his eyes.. Poor Fleetfoot..
Cant wait for the next chapter!

December 31, 2012
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You'll all see soon enough. ~_^ I'm glad you all enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad I could make your day, MW!

So yeah, your design has certainly influenced Braila's actions. XD

December 31, 2012
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I just got done reading chapters 16, 17 and 18. That alone officially made my day XD The last two chapters led up to this one nicely (I was particularly thrilled by Korin's speaking role in chapter 17) and I once again find myself increasingly excited about what's in store for these characters in the next chapter ^_^ I'm also quite curious to see what Skander has planned...

December 31, 2012
Usa Is not currently on the site
Vervain is stupid as crap. ( sorry for harsh words). That is what you deserve.

December 31, 2012
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Vervain just got what he deserved.
Yeah, the music went something like that when I was reading as well. ^^
Well...expect the unexpected. XD

December 31, 2012
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Yeah. As I wrote I had it to where the low, slowed dark reprise of the main theme was playing as Calemvir lost conciousness, then it released and got heroic where Campion comes and beats the crud outta Braila. XD He turned pretty much into Nacht's blood knight, whereas I planned him to be a skinny, fox-ish guy. He... just isn't. He turned into a big(Rangy!), bulky terror.

Anyway yeah. Vervain is dead now. xD I found your words amusing.

December 31, 2012
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Yeah, I hope Vervain will ponder about his stupidity while rotting in hell. -.- (Man, I'm mean today. But he deserves it.)
Nothing to thank me for. We all make mistakes sometimes. ^^
I usually listen to music while reading. Example: Tukuts exile? He's not one of us! ^^
Zimmer and Powell are amazing, I totally agree. ^^
The timing more or less fitted, yeah. I guess it depends on how fast one reads. :)
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