I totally forgot D: I have to get to work on the next chapters.

Yes, I put a great deal of thought into how I want to write things(Not really xD). I don't like something where EVERYTHING has some sort of twist, or nothing can be what it seems, or it's ACTIONACTIONACTION cal-NOWENEEDMOREACTION!!!! You need "Breather Episodes" so that you can release tension. It's a must xD

I never commented on this? IDIOT! *smacks self in the face* I'm so sorry! I guess this chapter was so awesome I thought I had commented on it already XD Very cool; I feel bad for the does who lost their mates and sons, but I am VERY curious to know what Skander is planning....I also like how you have calming chapters after the exciting ones. It gives your readers a chance to re-group and get themselves prepared for the awesomeness that follows Updating this is a must!!!!

I suppose I could work in an appearance for a doe of Kale's. I'll fix Lyall's name in the future, too xD

Yay another good chapter.I hope Nacht dies please! Feather, can i make a doe for Kale that can appear in the story?If there is going to be a rut part. You frogot to put Gobo,Lyal,and Kale up with all of the other chacters. Still very good.Can't wait to see the Lihua fawn^^

Great chapter, kinda depressing though. I cant wait to see what happens next!

Wow...why do aftermaths have to be so depressing?
And yay, finally Lyall (with two L at the end, by the way) makes an appearance. To be...Skander's competition? Okay, I'm proud that Nacht thinks so high of him, but...that's bad. Well, we'll see how the situation evolves.
And yeah, Nacht has Lihua now. A shame that we won't see Trar's reaction when Lihua's fawn makes an appearance, but...oh well.^^
I agree with Gobo, I'm pretty sure Skander is up to something. ^^
And...well, the rut has begun. I wonder what it brings. ^^

Chapter 19, having been finished for several days. ^^'