Origins of the Spirits: Chapter 1: White Sheeps

Author : saske italian wolf

Date sent : December 16, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Dakota and Yoki are part of the Salmon Run. One is going to be the future shaman, the other one follows her father's suggestions. They have friends, they have a family. But then why none of the bears around them look like them? Why are they the only ones with white fur? Maybe not all the truth was told to them.

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Origins of the Spirits: Chapter 1: White Sheeps
By saske italian wolf

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December 16, 2012
Global moderator Italy Female Is not currently on the site
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Grazie Benny *^*
Temevo d'aver rappresentato Dakota come un po' troppo infantile ma, dopotutto, anche io cercherei di negare a tutti i costi la verit� nei suoi panni e mi sarei arrabbiata con Yoki per aver tirato fuori l'argomento xD
Dai, finisco il settimo capitolo di HftN e poi, inizio a scrivere il secondo di questo! ;D

December 16, 2012
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Awwww c...cio� ma..ma � cavolo Gio! Troppo bella questa prima parte! 8D
Hai scritto divinamente! Tutto! *___*
La parte poi di quando Yoki incomincia a dire che Tug e Khalan nn sono i loro veri genitori e di come ha reagito Dakota..semplicemente fantastico **
Non vedo l'ora per la seconda parte < 333
Ottimo lavoro o3o

December 16, 2012
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Indeed Sasha is a jerk :C but luckily, she'll be able to change him, at least towards her! All those bad opinions towards Kermode Bears originated because of Akiak, it was probably him that slashed the random bear that Yoki tried to cure.

December 16, 2012
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Aww Poor Yoki the poor girl is really going through a lot for a young adult. Sasha seems like a bit of a jerk sorry to say it xD But I suppose with all the bad opinions about the Kermode Bears would make anyone testy or un-trusting towards them.

December 16, 2012
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Thank you Hige!
Haha don't worry ;D this won't be the last time you saw Dakota!

December 16, 2012
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Saske--> woah, this was an aazing chapter. Allready alot of drama and only the first chapter X"DD poor Dakota..I hope she is alive and safe.


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